I Want

I Want

A Poem by rhythm&blues
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Human/kindness

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I want so many things, 
where do I begin?

I want the sun to shine in smiles
and people to be kind
no poverty, war a thing of the past
appreciation for simple tasks

Seems people run around in a daze
forgetting what really counts
it's all about love, empathy and charity
if our hearts were full 
and our minds accepting 
life would be otherwise exceptional

Yes, I wrote this as a reminder 
for myself too, 
I'm not unlike you,
sometimes I forget the beauty
that exists in the simplicity, 
 miracle of miracles
 that we call humankind 


© 2013 rhythm&blues


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Its good to give ourselves the odd aide memoire to be as complete a human being as we can.
"From my point of view, he can be called a remarkable man who stands out from those around him by the resourcefulness of his mind, and who knows how to be restrained in the manifestations which proceed from his nature, at the same time conducting himself justly and tolerantly towards the weaknesses of others."
George Gurdjieff.

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Ken, an amazing quote, I appreciate both.
Ken Simm.

10 Years Ago

From a favourit book of mine by one of my heroes. The book is called Meetings with Remarkable Men.
rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

I will make it a point to put that one on my reading list.



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we live in world full of wants and in our race to obtain all these wants we tend to overlook some of the most simple yet the most important aspect in life. This is a wonderful reminder to all of us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review gabrielle.
Beautiful poem with a beautiful message. Good one R&B

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rhythm&blues

10 Years Ago

Thank you BR, glad you like this one.

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I really don't know what to say on these 'about me' pages. I'm newly divorced, have recently found poetry and loving every minute of it. I'm a bit on the shy side until you get to know me. My best .. more..

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