Spring After the Thaw

Spring After the Thaw

A Poem by rhythm&blues

I forgive you your wicked ways
although it'll not bring me slumber
my own well being is at stake

no time to waste on your reflection


I will not wallow in your betrayal
there are many sunrises to behold
dragons to be slayed aside from you,
not to mention the spring after the thaw

© 2013 rhythm&blues


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The spring after the thaw is so much more poetic than so many other euphemisms. I am enamored of that snippet- the dragons will still need to be slayed for they are always breathing down our necks, but that thaw- that is pure magic. It's a beautiful poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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rhythm&blues

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much icelandicblue, means a lot coming from someone as talented as you.



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love the title ... its thought provoking ... a fine hook for me ;) love the warrior spirit of your heroine ... strong closing with the repeating of the title says i .. well done! hope you come back around this Cafe' and share more of your poetry
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


I don't understand the euphemism: "Spring after the thaw". Could you please clarify for me its significance? I'm curious.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

looks like rhythm and blues is away .. for a long time now ... i will give it a shot tho .. for thos.. read more
"There are many sunrises to behold" is so lovely a euphemism. That line instills hope to those who read it. " dragons to be slayed aside from you"; this is so interesting to read.

Posted 5 Years Ago


dear poet... "Dragons to be slayed aside from you"
seems to be a theme in my life... however, I am thankful
for the peace and serenity of the River that runs
through our town where happiness ripples along
like a beautiful song. truly, Pat


Posted 5 Years Ago


This writing is very well written and I love the depth and emotion is shows


Posted 5 Years Ago


Spring's a season of love that creates bunches of imagery in minds. Your poetry's one of 'em. It's 'bout healing & moving the past-winds & replacing it all well with another & better lit of love.

"my own well being is at stake... no time to waste on your reflection... " Favorite lines. So much depth's hidden behind your the cave of your words. Well written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful! Start sleighing those dragons!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Robert Vicens

5 Years Ago

I've never heard of sleighing dragons. It must be fun. I wonder if Santa Clause gets jealous that h.. read more
I really love the way it was written!
:)
Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Short, sweet, and elegant.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Knowing that your life is at stake even after heeding to the voice of wisdon (FORGIVENESS), I will advise you to beware of such a friend, mate, relative, who cannot be remorseful after receiving forgiveness..... Hope this is just a poem, and has nothing slight to do with reality? Nice lines if so.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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