Back to Nature

Open your mind

to beauty

to things unseen

to mysteries and treasuers unfound and untold

Open your mind to truth

To dreams , to hope to the future

 

Listen carefuly

to the sweet few moments of tranquilty

Of Our Mother sings

Sings a song of soothing verses

that brings joy in your soul

 

Look around

what beauty is there?

In each youth and aged,

A subtle beauty so unique

in context in truth.

 

Take in the magnificant fragrance nature provides

 

Enjoy your life

What your world has to offer

Free your mind

Listen to the spirits' sings

And take in the sights that no artist

Could fathom such a masterpiece

 

 

Author's Note

This is experimental Be merciful.

Reviews

[Jason Young]

This is great! Your rhythm is fantastic. Once you establish that little groove, you don't stray from it. The message you're trying to get across is beautiful, and absolutely true. If only we could all just sit back, stop everything, and enjoy life.

Merry Christmas from your friendly neighborhood author!

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

The greatest artist: God

The greatest canvas: Earth

You stroke your canvas with the brush of your words and breathe new life into the beauty of nature.

I love the poem and the picture choice --- both in tribute to truth.

Keep shining!

Linda Marie Van Tassell

[Wildecat]

Excellent poem, and excellent advice. I too enjoy Mother Nature. Nice Write.

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

Experimenting is always good, helps you kill those old inhibitions! Anyways, it's nice to know that there are other nature lovers out there. The simplicity of the commands is magnificent. Overall an interesting and good read!