ignored

whenever i get ighnored it  just doesn't feel write

whenever i get ignored it feels like im going to cry

whenever im ignored i just want to be alone

but if u try to talk u won't be ignored

ever agian

Reviews

[Robert Francis Callaci]

The overall message of the poem is good- to avoid being ignored learn how to be heard-

When posting a work to the public you need to put a effort in proofreading- Lots of typos and text speak. This can be off putting to readers - grammar and spelling are crucial in writing not just ideas- You have potential- you need to work on the craft and not rush the work- I hope to be reading more of your work.


my warmest
bob

[mirui]

again. um...okay.