I love him.

I love him.

A Poem by rielovella
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I hope that he knows it too.

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His memories in this place are fading away.

But just walking in the middle of the city,

I remember everything about him.

My tears start to fall on my cheeks.

If those memories can be repeated,

I will not cry.

So that he can see that I’m okay.

I love him so dearly.

His unforgettable smile haunts me once again.

His loving hug is like the wind that’s too warm and big.

Unfortunately, I won’t be able to see and feel him.

He’s already gone.

I love him.

I hope that he knows it too.

© 2010 rielovella


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you know what, i can totally relate with this. though it was the past you know. I bet you know who i am so in love right now. And i really mean it hahaha.. SOO IN LOVE with him. The good thing was, I was done with this. He's part of the past. Right now, we're good friends..., i guess :) This poem is very sad yet powerful. You speak of your emotions through words of poetry. I'm loving this. I've been planning of composing a new one but I just don't know how I waste my time ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Even hough I have a slightly different story, I can relate to this. It's a nicely written poem, so good job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw, this poem is really sad but the presence of missing someone really comes through.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can really tell how you feel about him from this. Good job!(:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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rielovella
rielovella

Muntinlupa, Philippines



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I'm Liriel. 15 years old girl living in Philippines I like writing stories about love(especially about S.H.E. and Fahrenheit. In short, fanfic. :) ) and poems(if I'm inspired). I write likeS.. more..

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