Sp3ct3r *Dan & BLitZ3D*

A collaboration between BLitZ3D and myself. I like my contribution but BLitZ3D gave it extra life with his brilliant talent. I can't thank him enough, and we both hope you like the results...dan

*SPECTER*

*Dan & BLitZeD*

 

 

Stealthy ‘pon the Witching Hour

 

Towers all misgiven hatred,

 

Braced by cold wind’s demonic howling

 

Scowling as is such His nature;

 

Spewing horror, spit from his lair

 

Sulfuric air his grisly fanfare,

 

Specter grins in image sardonic,

 

A tonic for all the good to perish.

 

Hypnotic stare, no words to speak, nightmarish glare

 

Once again he breathes chilled air

 

Takes the children, mothers bare

 

Come back for them slowly, likes when they’re scared

 

On the back wings flare, one soul is the cost, it’s passed around and shared

 

Time taken, handled with care, a laughable thought, if only hope dared 

 

The pain is in the torture, the tortures in the chair, 

 

The preachers in the church, and I got his daughter by the hair,

 

F*****g beat her, does it hurt? you'll find no body in the dirt,

 

Upside down daemons lurk, his new minion, she lay there burnt

 

 

 

   He cackles, surveying his dominion,

 

   Recalls the new and those he vanquished;

 

   Anguish always his stock in trade,

 

   He made this world from his horrid image.

 

   Watch him sneer with violent purpose,

 

   Surfacing in his ghastly triumph;

 

   He jumps toward those couched in courage,

 

   His scourge devouring such brave mortals.

 

   Spit them out refurbished, they enter through portals

 

   Paranormal purple circles, a door way, travel astronomical hurdles

 

   From other dimensions, not these heavens,  

 

   The string theory claims threes a total of eleven 

 

   Side note, my pen came from the seventh, 

 

   Chance is you won’t get a second, a legend 

 

   I'm the first amendment of evils independents 

 

   Woman and men went through hell to be in attendance   

 

 

 

 

          Watch the Specter drum the cadence

 

           See him howl his hoary pleasure.

 

          Watch the Specter direct the digging

 

          Watch them die,

 

          Each splatter measured

 

         In matter dead, sir

 

          Fact of matter, I can resurrect her

 

          Give her back lost youth, child neglecter

 

           But I reject that subject, mercy would reflect that’s incorrect, brrr 

 

           This world is my side effect, all the way down to the architecture

 

Dan & BLitZeD © 2015

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[BLitZeD]

You are to kind in your comment replies. it was my pleasure working on this with you.

[Amber Lily]

This is a fantastic collaboration... possibly the best one I've read on this site so far. The darkness practically oozes from this piece and drips into the reads heart, creating chills and thrills. Each part one person did complemented the other so well. This is so good I can't find many words to express my amazement, so then I shall say, well done! Both of you :)

[dan]

Thank you Amber. But I have to give most of the credit to Blitzed. All I did was send him an older poem I had laying around and he did the rest. He has amazing talent and I'm happy with the collab and the finished piece. Thanks again for the enthusiastic review. take care...dan

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

*Slow Clap* you can tell two different artist came together, but its flawless in its collaboration, smooth and flowing together very nicely. Both of you should be proud of your selves with this one

[dan]

Crystal, Thank you so much. I thought that my contribution to the collab was pretty good, but Blitzed wrote the part that really made the piece soar. He's got so much talent, writing in a style that evokes hip-hop lyric writing. I always welcome your feedback on my writes. Thanks again! take care...dan

[AaronFreitas]

This is one of the best collabs I've read... major props to both of you! I loved each line and it flowed perfectly! Great work both writers :)

[dan]

Aaron, Thank you...my thought is that my contribution was pretty good but Blitzed added his piece and it just set the piece ON FIRE!! He's got such enormous talent I feel very fortunate to have been able to work with him on this. Thanks to you, but major props to him! take care...dan

[Aphy!]

Love the layout of the poem as well as the feel of it!
I really liked the dark feel of it
Sense of mystery a
And it sent chills running down my spine
(Because it was that good hey)

Well done buddy
Keep it up

Aphy

[dan]

My contribution was fine but the work Blitzed put into it is what really made it take off. His talent made mine appear better than it really is, and I thank him for that! Thanks so much for your detailed read/review, I/we really appreciate it. take care...dan

[ANTO]

Like layers of an onion being peeled each layer is progressively more potent - only the core of this particular onion is Hell itself. I say this worked very well - its like a work by Hyde and Hyde - no Jekyll-esque relief in sight. Not my cup of tea is as much as Im not a big fan of the dark but definitely a super-dark piece. Well done guys.

[dan]

ANTO, I used to write nothing BUT dark pieces, don't so much anymore. This, however, was too good a chance for me to pass up. I've long been enamored by Blitzed's style and content in his writing so doing this collaboration with him was extremely fun and rewarding. His input into the piece really bolstered the effect of the piece and I'm very grateful to him for doing this. Thank you for your review, even though dark is not your taste in hot beverages. take care...dan

[Bear]

A marriage of words that grows into sentences, giving meaning to the understanding of two separate minds focused on one task. Mental magic the resulting work of literature, created by the desire to touch countless minds and cast a spell of entertainment upon them. The poem as good as it is, stands in shadows of the authors ability to work together. I applaud your success in understanding and to each focus your minds on work in unison together and work your magic and cast the spell that I just read. Bravo!

[dan]

I consider myself fortunate that a writer of Blitzed' character and talent wanted to work with me on this. His contribution to the collaboration made the piece soar high, higher than I could have done alone. I thank him mightily, and I thank you Bear for the thoughtful review. take care...dan

[JayceeC]

Dan, you did an excellent job picking the song for this. (One of my all-time favorites) The Intro was perfect for setting the pace for the write and added to the darkness. Actually, I think your words made me look at the song in a slightly different vein. The back beat is dark, but I never really consider this song's lyrics to be quite as sinister as you have made the poem. It's obvious that dark was Metallica's intent, I just have always ignored it, because I see sleep as a haven rather than a hell.

The tone of this is much darker than your usual, but you and Blitzed managed to come up with a piece that will stand the test of time and merges your styles in a way that, while noticeable, works well. Great graphic imagery that is slammed out in a vocabulary that lets the reader know that it is not the work of amateurs.

[dan]

Wow, I'm so flattered. I think that mine and Blitzed styles immersed them into each other's minds and churned out something much more of which I was capable on my own. I owe a lot to him for his abundant talent and creativity. Thank you so much for my choice of music. take care...dan

[JayceeC]

It's called Synergy! Blitzed seems to do this well with many which is a talent. He brings out new dimensions in other poets. This is crazy dark, but it's very good.

[dan]

Thank you so much! take care...dan

[BLitZeD]

damn, thats actually one of the nicest things some one has said about me.. thanks jaycee