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Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Rileigh Henson

When he looks at me, 
I can't breathe. 
It's like he's choking me, 
and all I can do is
say, "I love you". 
With my last dying breath. 

© 2015 Rileigh Henson


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That's one way to go out... Aside from greed, there is no other torrent in this world like love. No one is immune to such said addiction. Very strong words you've chosen, rileigh...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, you couldn't express the feeling of powerful, overwhelming love and passion any better. A short poem but full of profound meaning. And how appropriate that I'm reading it on Valentine's Day! I'm happy to have gotten the read request.

Posted 5 Years Ago


That is pretty powerful. It gives you so many emotions: love, sadness, deprivation. It is magnificent.

Posted 5 Years Ago


wait you say that you look at him as you feel like choking but why on earth is it your dying breath is my question other than that it sounds like no words can describe it that's all i think

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2015
Last Updated on February 13, 2015
Tags: poetry, him, breathe, dying, love

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Rileigh Henson
Rileigh Henson

Indianapolis , IN



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