First Time!

First Time!

A Poem by Herl Rodrin

Poem I've written years ago as my piece for literary column in our university's publication. You'll find cool twist as you read the poem up to the end. It's not what you think it is! :D





“Are you ready my little sweetie?”

I looked at him with teary eyes.

“ This is my very first time”,

A frightened voice echoed in his mind.


He grinned at me,

And held my hands

A sincere promise that it won’t hurt,

And whispered everything will be fine.


He said, “I am a guru to this darling,

Just listen to my instructions.

Come on let’s do it now!

Lie down & open it wider.”


I said, “Please remember to be careful..”

“Enter it slowly & not to deeply.

I can see the hugeness is immeasurable,

Afraid that mine will soon be sore..”


I’m starting to feel the pain,

It’s torturing my whole body.

Tears started to drop & dive,

I guess the size is hurting me now.



“Calm down my little sweetie”,

He smirked & winked at me.

“Try to open it up a little wider

So I can find a way in smoothly.”


“It’s coming now my dear”, he whispered.

“Can you feel it? Can you feel it?”

I can sense the taste of euphoria,

And feel it deep-rooted within me.


And now for the finale,

A loud shout has been released.

He pushed & twisted it,

Then pulled it out suddenly..


I whispered & sighed,

And lay my body down.

I looked at him & smiled.

And said I’m so happy I came now..


And  for you, my dear reader,

I want to clear things up.

In this story, a dentist you’ll find

And not what you've imagined inside your dirty mind!



















© 2011 Herl Rodrin

Author's Note

Herl Rodrin
I want to know if I was able to connect every words and phrases to my real subject. Let your imagination roll!

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This was so funny! I may never look at my dentist the same way again though...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Funny. Cute. Horny. AHAHAHAHAHAHA

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is funny; actually. I liked it. Never expected that. Seems like quite a creepy dentist.."my little sweetie." Well done! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

My dentist is my aunt, so understandably I felt awkward at the twist. Hahaha. Anywho, awesome piece. So much of what I find on here (and I too am guilty of this) is just teenage angsty dark love poetry. It's refreshing to see something light and humorous. keep it up, i enjoy your stuff.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Ha this was a turn of events, I liked it. :) Great job by the way I loved the last line.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on August 3, 2011
Last Updated on August 3, 2011
Tags: Poem, First, Dentist, Creative Writing, Story, Experience


Herl Rodrin
Herl Rodrin

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