My Love

My Love

A Poem by Kevin

Your smile brightens my day 

Your laugh curls my lips 

To form a smile you can not forget 

Your touch brings joy 

And makes my boy scream oh boy 

Your voice is an angel singing 

And soothes me to sleep 

Like a song from heaven 

That only you and god have a key 

Sometimes I'm scared to sleep 

I don't want you to be a dream 

I can not keep 

I can not express how I feel 

But know that my love is real 

© 2010 Kevin


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This is very cute and honest. It's not a weighty piece of gothic, romantic poetry but I like the fact that it is clearly heartfelt. If you wanted to edit anything I'd say keep the joy/o boy moments and hold back on the angels singing (angels have been just about done to death by poets over the years!)

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Kevin
Kevin

Colorado Springs, CO



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I am currently enlisted in the Army, and have been in for six years. Recently I realized I really want to write, and think i have a decent baseline to start with. I have a beautiful wife and two won.. more..

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