Pure Joy

Pure Joy

A Poem by Rachel
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A paradoxal evaluation of joy vs. pain.

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Pain reaches for the pen

       dips it in ink

                fresh piece of paper

writes and writes and writes

       hurts his hand

               until he finishes

he stops and weeps

        it is too much

               joy has embraced him.

© 2010 Rachel


Author's Note

Rachel
symbolism is very prevelant.

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TJ
Very emotional very powerful packed into so few words..
Good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pain reaches for the pen
dips it in ink

I adore this line so-so much. This is a remarkable write. Love the strength in words. Amazing Talent.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 10, 2010
Last Updated on December 16, 2010

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Rachel

Fort Smith, AR



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