"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land"   IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

"Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land" IN COLLABORATION WITH FRIEDA

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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i am missing Ms. Frieda and decided to re-post this poem which we did together .. i am so angry how one very nasty person was able to drive her from the Cafe :(

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Mushroom Clouds in Magic Land

Tapped upon a mushroom cap's fancy,
      to see if the rabbit hole was rumor
curiouser and curiouser
     about the unimaginable avenue,

She opens my mind and
fear grips my colors
from the hinterland .....                   tremors
wink    
           and blink   
                              and nod

As I sat upon my newfangled gumption
   common sense took a recess,
 spoke in rhyme to the tune of absurd
     to my surprise, the scaramouch    
                 of a head talked back

my birthing in darkness
          musk and dank scent
knocks        my shroom
head explodes
            collide's scope intense

in his elegant persuasion,
made a date for half past daft
took me on a dip of a mystical carpet trip
 alas,  we've lived happily ever after
upon a prime floating island in a cloud

clouds of words
spilling like rough gouged stones in
tumbler's majestic insane
forever now i
 

re-pronounce her name



beginning and



end... ;)

                      

© 2016 Einstein Noodle


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What a superb collaboration from you and dear, dear Frieda = yours are minds that walk the same space.. perhaps!

There's so much in this piece, the colour and highlights take the reader into a world of bewilderingly spaced.out somewhere. The phrasing you've used is another language, a magic not to be translated - and who would want to do that...all of us!

Lewis Carrol would undoubtedly want to join the two of you in another collab, happily sharing his enlightenment via any means - even holding the breath and flying off and away with the daisies. . Brava and brava again.. Loved this. Great musical accompaniment, by the way... ..

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

yes,,to all that dear emma...i raise my voice with you ... unfortunately i have little hope she will.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

STILL and always will miss Frieda. She taught me how to giggle, curse, raise a pinky, talk insanitie.. read more



Reviews

This poem alleviates me of my reason and lets me run free in the absurd. I want to be free of logic sometimes in a creative and playful way.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

ahahahaha ...thanks for the big smile on me face Cousin! :) yes .. reason can be such a bugger .. br.. read more
This is so amazing, I enjoyed this write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

ahahahaha! you found Frieda and my colab! ... its a bit fanciful but we had great fun writing togeth.. read more
love this amazing piece..Einstein.. love the wording and imagery.. it’s just an awesome piece.
Kind regards Katrina

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

hi Katrina! pretty happy you found and enjoyed reading ... we had much fun in the collaboration ..th.. read more
Saw you reposted this and couldn't help myself, but to read it yet again. Still holds up after so long! Truly miss taking the spiraling trips through her creative headspace. The two of you have created truly a timeless piece. Just gorgeous... still.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

wow Travis!! what a treat to see you ... thank you for revisiting .. and yes .. we miss her .. one a.. read more
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

2 Months Ago

She is most certainly missed. In a weird way, I am thankful to have missed whatever issue drove her .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

thanks so much Travis .. back at ya!
Ah shrooms. A good poem, not sure if making this poem about tripping on shrooms was your intention; but I get those vibes so forgive me if I’m wrong. Shrooms are amazing things, and very good for creativity. Love love the poem. And shrooms haha. It’s sad to think someone pushed your friend away; that has happened to my friends on here as well. I almost, myself stopped writing here. Your note isn’t a reminder that we should work together as a community’s and drive out these trolls and mean profiles.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sarah_Allen

2 Months Ago

Oh hahaha, I kinda always picture magic land with mushrooms now haha. Yes, it is a very spiritual th.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

you too Sarah! love your avatar by the way! :)
Sarah_Allen

2 Months Ago

Thank you haha
Lovely poem , Frieda gone like much of our life , lovely collaboration.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

thanks Moon! yes ... times an eraser now and again isn't it :((( thanks so much for taking time and .. read more
It's beautiful and I have no need of any deep understanding to appreciate it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

:) way to be Ufi!!! one of the best reviews received! big smile on me face reading you enjoyed the r.. read more
This took me on a trip! Wow! You have a great voice with your poetry. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

hello CL! thank you for the visit! ... i am always amazed that people still find this poem .. it is .. read more
This makes me want to take shrooms and go on trip with you, lol!

You have an interesting mind and rich imagination. This piece is like an out of rhythym tune, but because it's unpredictable in wild colours and yet gently spoken, it creates a beauty of it's own within the chaos it exists in.

Thank you for your reviews on my musings. 😊

Posted 8 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

you know A ... i was going to suggest that you might enjoy reading this one ... how totally cool you.. read more
A. Musing

8 Months Ago

haha! I'm a bit of escapist, so this is like a trip down the rabbit hole and into Wonderland :D I en.. read more
Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

thank you :))))))))))))))))))))))))
This is piece takes your mind into a different space. Beautifully written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

ahahaha yes it does doesn't it?! :)))))))))))))))) nice to meet you sonnie .. thank you for the visi.. read more
sonnie ibadah

8 Months Ago

a pleasure ;)

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