Oh Lord

to be felt deeply ;)

Oh Lord

My prayers, oh Lord

as graces pour over

mind and soul, 

I see.

Clearly Your way, 

oh Lord

Should so softly be,

"Easy off" 

in cleansing me.

Sorry Lord!

Its just that change

in deep, hidden places

corrupt ......         poisons ..... 

Your

Rivers running.

04/20/2017

E.

Author's Note

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

At last I have a minute to review this one....

One of those saying a 1000 ideas in only a few words.....and it is hard to explain, until one has actually experience what it means to find that grace.....some may appreciate the poetic aspect, but it can only truly be experienced when you find the real thing....:)

Thanks for this one, buddy.....

[Einstein Noodle]

your welcome Sleepless .. and thank you for such a deep reading of this one ... the "experience" kind of requires the "real" of the road eh!? really appreciate your review sir ..very much!
E.

[emmajoy]

There is peace in conversation with Himself in this, a chat, not a prayer, a feeling of finding more than a Father, more a good friend. Tis beautiful - and how it should be.

[Einstein Noodle]

so glad you felt that emma ... prayers are most certainly just a conversation ...open and honest as we can be eh!? thank you for taking time ma'am!
E.

[Alice Maria]

I really enjoyed this poem. We rely on God for nearly everything, and He always provides. Great poem.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes He does! thank you so much for reading and sharing your impressions and faith .. its always important! ;)
E.

[Alice Maria]

You are very welcome.

[B]

The call for the divine
is one of sacred care
whispers that no one has the pour to hear
but god
and we seek god at times of confusion and distortion
hopefully receiving much clarity

very well done !!!

[Einstein Noodle]

what a beautiful review! it brings that peace and comfort to me all by itself! thanks for taking time Lookatthestars ... we need God don't we!?
E.

[B]

yes we do :)

[KT-B]

Good work.. how simple is the Lords wants for us, yet as simple as it is, why is it so difficult to live by? I enjoyed this very much :)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! Simple!! and we make it so hard most of the time ... thanks for walking around my spaces a bit KT ..glad we have met .. i appreciate your reading and taking time to review ..its a good thing to get feedback .. positive and critical as well ..
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... cleansing of the soul is a lovely path that leads to eternity. For me, it is an every day prayer as I listen to the song of the sparrow. Your poetry is sung with a wisp of reality. truly heartfelt and encouraging. Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

man! you hear me Patricia .. and i you ..one can break their head on the mountain of God when all along it is the giving up .. the resolving of the great distance between God and our human condition ... i will hear the sparrow a little differently this morning thanks to your comment .. so happy this poem gave you such thoughts .. peace and love my friend!
E.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear E... I love the song, "His eye is on the Sparrow and I know He watches me..." My best testimony is... "I though so unworthy... still am a child of His care". truly, Pat

[Einstein Noodle]

no better peace to find is there?!

[Patricia Wedel]

Sometimes in a gathering in a church or in the Cathedral of the woods, you can hear the rustling of angel wings... Amen

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................

[Ruth]

This is so tenderly articulated and yet there is such a visceral undercurrent pulling beneath it...the depths of such holiness seldom come without a whirlpool or three...left me thoughtful hon...

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you Poppy! so very gratified by your response ...couldn't ask for better this morning... thanks so much!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

I'm sure he sees, a nice write Sir E

[Einstein Noodle]

yes...i believe God is omni-present ...tho His eyes may not be quite as ours eh!? glad you stopped by my friend ..thank you!
E.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes I agree, and my pleasure.

[Ken Simm.]

A deeply felt and illuminating write my friend. One wonders if this was cathatic enough? Excellent.

[Einstein Noodle]

yeh ...i hear you .. it really doesn't leave the reader with a happy remission does it ... i will give that some thought sir ..perhaps change it a bit down the road ... i do like the never ending faulty condition of humans tho ;) always in need eh!? thanks you very much as always for visits and reviewing sir ..it is an honor for sure!
E.

[barleygirl]

I enjoy your unusual conversation with God, especially the parts that refer to cleansing, which are imaginative & relatable. This is definitely "felt deeply" . . . the way you leave your sentiments brief & open-ended so the reader can have his/her own style of sacred experience.

[Einstein Noodle]

very much appreciate your sensitive read and analysis of this poem ... your take could not make me feel more gratified .. love and peace sis! peace and joy!
E.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, I felt it deeply. A deeply moving poem, one I could identify with. No need to change, Einstein, just stay exactly as you are! And enjoy!!!!

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks Auntie! I think all the changes I am capable of are complete .. some things run so deep they need a trencher to get at them ;} I think accepting that, as you suggest, is a blessed road :) thanks for reading my friend .. and fro sharing your thoughts .. and for your kind support ... much appreciated ma'am
E.