In Loving God

In Loving God

A Poem by Einstein Noodle

In Loving God
Image result for dandelions in the wind
I let the dogs out this morning  
the sky still dark
the windbreeze pressing the moist fog to my face and mind
it smells like fresh hung linens
the dogs offer lakes and rivers
leave fertile architectures ..... shapes like
The Tower of Pisa, 
                                   the Pantheon,
Pyramids and sprawling ranches ...
they are big dogs with plenty of supplies
thank you oh Lord ... thank you oh Lord
taking once more a deep precious breath 
of my life.
Towers hoisted against forbearing sky - 
mountain's root and nerve the
 oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord 
a persistent rapport
The dog chases the trails of nightfall and
I inhale the scents: perpetuity on mortality
So, thank you, oh Lord, for every deep breath of my life
How can one express such splendor 
such vast an expanse in the smallest of life
green shoots and sprouts
clear, clean ice drops .................
one drop of God
on seeking tongues
on bending oak and iron
when our heavy rain enfolds comfort arms
on weathered, rusted roofs ................
God's own assurance melds,
welds the bonds ............
How big you are 
Oh God.
E.
02/23/2018

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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Einstein Noodle

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Your poetry a celebration of dawn rising. Your lines elevating my mood. As I respond to you the early sun floods through the upper bay window where we are staying for the week. All is good with my world and that is the feeling your words give me too. We should appreciate the simple things in life. Appreciation of little things can bring contentment in a world where there is such cruelty. We are but specks in the ocean of time. Your poetry, rich with its spiritual thread weaving through its warp and weft.
Thank you Mr E.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

you connect with me ... what a treasure ... God bless your stay and view from that bay window ... so.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Sending all good wishes to you across the pond :)



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Your poem is a beautiful reflection on the beauty of nature and the gratitude we feel for the simple things in life. The imagery you use - the moist fog pressing against your face, the lakes and rivers the dogs offer, the undying accord you see - is particularly effective in conveying a sense of the vastness and wonder of the world around us. Your expression of gratitude - "thank you oh Lord" - is a powerful reminder that we should be thankful for every breath we take and every moment we have. Overall, I think your poem is a beautiful celebration of life and a reminder that even the smallest things can be sources of wonder and joy.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

8 Months Ago

yes! thank you so much for joining in the celebration and letting me know .. your review is very gra.. read more
dearest Gene... Nature affords our Soul with love and caring...
we are part of the Light that shines through the branches before
the Moon fades and the Sun rises. And when we Nap in the
Sunbeams of quiet enlightenment... we embrace the Creator's Gift
of warmth and blessings. May your days be the sweetest slumber
when ill winds blow with bits of thunder. tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

and right back at ya Pat! your review reveals a bit of Irish in you, no doubt! what a comforting ble.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

It is a tough time with so many crossing the Border...
it seems so surreal... especially the.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

Yes .. Jesus did say that
I chose this one to read since we are marveling together about the majesty of a beautiful day, nature and the likes - you paint a wonderful picture I can see it all in my minds eye - clever writer, I am humbled you take the time to read and review my simple offerings -:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

and so am i KT-B ... humbled and grateful to be getting to know you a bit ... this is kind of one of.. read more
I am so happy to have come across your beautiful write this morning. It makes for a wonderful start to the day and a reminder that God is still in control. We can stew, worry and fret about all the things that seem to go wrong in life but at the end of the day, what a blessing to go to bed knowing that 'He's got this!' and can sleep peacefully. One of my worst traits is trying to save the world. I must remember that there is someone 'up there' who is more powerful than anything we know on this earth. Thank you for your words today dear E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thank you for your review Dara ... its a rain all day today .. and i really don't feel much like bei.. read more
Your poetry a celebration of dawn rising. Your lines elevating my mood. As I respond to you the early sun floods through the upper bay window where we are staying for the week. All is good with my world and that is the feeling your words give me too. We should appreciate the simple things in life. Appreciation of little things can bring contentment in a world where there is such cruelty. We are but specks in the ocean of time. Your poetry, rich with its spiritual thread weaving through its warp and weft.
Thank you Mr E.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

you connect with me ... what a treasure ... God bless your stay and view from that bay window ... so.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Sending all good wishes to you across the pond :)
mountain's root and nerve the
oceans' poise ....................
I see .................
an undying accord
a persistent rapport

Just one of the many bells that resonate throughout your amazing tribute. The whimsy of big dogs to big God, and the seriousness of philosophy run like a stream bisecting every line.

Glory, upon glory.

V

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

thank you for reading with mind and heart and spirit ..that's what it's all about isn't it ... so gl.. read more
The majesty of dog poop... amused and also impressed that you can find beauty there. How do you bear to shovel it up and throw it out?
Seriously, as a devout believer, I think this is a beautiful piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

so glad you see my intent ... oh... i bear it all right ... i have two very large dogs and their art.. read more
Very enjoyable poem in the countryside dog walking and savouring life and living.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

yes ... certain moments stand out don't they?! when things in our heads slow to a stop and we realiz.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

My pleasure. Thanks E. For sharing.
I admire this. It's sense of certain. While there are those of us who question, especially in times of dark ... nicely done

Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

what a treat to have your visits Lyn! thank you so much ... yes...Faith it is that lights up any dar.. read more
How big thou art, oh God and greater still tis true.. He tauhgt us how to live and love each other too! He gave the world to us for us to appreciate His goodness and His might. ... He made the lame to walk and gave to some new sight!


Posted 5 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

how delightful to read your review...praising Almighty God ... all so true :) are we just meeting? m.. read more
kitty

5 Years Ago

Peace & Love returned. Thanks!

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