Rose Colored Glasses

Rose Colored Glasses

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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you tell me! ;)

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                                                Rose Colored Glasses
prisms
rose and glass
clinking them i drink
scented fresh Chardonnay  
bouquet red blush
pulling on one leg at a time
i wear cotton fast to sleep
little worlds of bliss
a kiss
i pray my soul to keep
11/03/2018
E.

© 2018 Einstein Noodle


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I like this. I like the simplicity of it. It is a sweet, readable, memorable poem. I am lousy at reading and writing poetry, this is at my level. Thank you. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

simplicity can be a balm in the clutter of the noodle eh!? glad you found one to enjoy Kelly .. and .. read more
Kelly Kepler

6 Months Ago

Likewise. :)
A prayer and a toast and a cheeky dram, to sleep perchance to … Like a good wine, fine, fine, fine,

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

yes! thanks so much for finding this one .. and reading with sensitivity and wit ... hope my comfort.. read more
I love it very interesting piece.


prisms

rose and glass
clinking them i drink
scented fresh Chardonnay
bouquet red blush


Thank you for sharing
my friend


Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

thank you Benita .. glad you liked! ;)
E.
i 'got' the first stanza but not he 2nd.
i couldn't quite 'get' the juxtaposition of the 2 stanzas, a bit too esoteric for my brain, einstein.
then reading the comments from junglee & ardra i understood the whole poem.
it seems i have to read people's comments for my brain to comprehend your 'sui generis' poetry.
but i keep trying !
cheerio carola

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

bless you so much for reading .. i read comments sometimes as well ... words do funny things to us i.. read more
my friend this is one amazing poem... giving me something to ponder on deeply about the depth of love

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

wow! i feel so gratified this touched some deeper places for you ... thank you so much for letting m.. read more
Sounds like the night time prayer of a lonesome dove. He sounds contented but still somehow longing for the romantic side of life?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

nothing so soulful as the song of a dove ... so many simple things in life are so deeply rewarding a.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

1 Year Ago

And to you big 'E'
Hi,
Long time no read!
This is really interesting. I personally think it is very important to see both ends of the spectrum, so I relate this.
Hope you're doing well. I apologise for my absence. I am in college now.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

there are always at least two sides of our stories for sure Simran .. big congrats on college .. and.. read more
Simran Kewlani

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
I shall update my page soon so you can have a read.
after a long days maceration, I tend to blush at such prose.... My sister (an artist) once told me that everything is violet upon leaving home to never return so i bought a pair of purple sunglasses and have worn them ever since, so I have to agree with her. Very contemplative writing Mr Noodle!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) thanks Bad! i recall an acquaintance back in the 60s that wore purple glasses ... i always though.. read more
we all need rose coloured glasses sometimes to see only the good and warmth around us :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

well ... i need them from time to time ;) thanks for stopping to read and review Stella! top o' the .. read more
Very nice. It somehow made me think about a person taking their last drink and then dying in their sleep.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

isn't it incredible the different things we see in the same picture ;) thank you so much for your re.. read more
JungLee

1 Year Ago

Thanks it is!

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