Dear You

Dear You,
Do you know that it's true?
My love, my love
Mi amor,
It just simply won't do.
You say a word,
Maybe two
Then you change your mind
That is what you do.
So You my dear
Know I won't
Just simply won't go along
This is stupid,
Endless!
So my love, my love
Mi amor,
You're wrong
Good-bye
Farewell

Your love

Author's Note

I do not know what I just wrote... Just tell me what you think

Reviews

[Zoe Anne]

Short, sweet, and simple. I like it! =)

[DamienHino]

hmm...like he told you something that disappointed you and that was the end of that relationship...interesting poem, gets me wondering

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. I just didn't get the line
' I must tell you that you a wrong'
i think it should be 'you are wrong' instead :)