Gentle Kisses

Gentle Kisses

A Poem by Raul Moreno

A haiku for Spring

Loden rose petals
Blush with the first fervent kiss,
Of the warm Spring breeze.

© 2010 Raul Moreno

Author's Note

Raul Moreno
Loden is a waterproof woolen cloth...I made reference to the texture of the petals to the cloth.

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Great write because if the breeze is not too strong the rose stands its ground..Very descriptive and expressive. Sunflower

Posted 11 Years Ago

Short, delicate, has a soft, sensual feel as well.
Good write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

Good write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on March 25, 2010
Tags: Haiku, Nature

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