Metallic Morn

Metallic Morn

A Poem by Raul Moreno
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based on metallic colors.

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Sleepy auburn hills,
Wake to the warm touch of gold:
Under pewter skies.

© 2010 Raul Moreno


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Nice job, you give it a visionistic feel with the use of the right words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You're really good at creating so much imagery in so few words. I like this a lot, especially the first line, "Sleepy auburn hills,".
Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on March 25, 2010
Tags: Haiku, Nature


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