Metallic Morn

Metallic Morn

A Poem by Raul Moreno

based on metallic colors.

Sleepy auburn hills,
Wake to the warm touch of gold:
Under pewter skies.

© 2010 Raul Moreno

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register


Nice job, you give it a visionistic feel with the use of the right words.

Posted 11 Years Ago

You're really good at creating so much imagery in so few words. I like this a lot, especially the first line, "Sleepy auburn hills,".
Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


2 Reviews
Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on March 25, 2010
Tags: Haiku, Nature

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..