Mountain of Regrets

Mountain of Regrets

A Poem by Raul Moreno


As large boulders weep,
Tears stream down sharp cheeks of stone:
Sobbing precipice.

© 2010 Raul Moreno

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Brilliant ~

Posted 11 Years Ago

"Sobbing precipice" !!!! Terrific line, Haikulander! Outstanding piece, one of your best. Ruben.

Posted 11 Years Ago

I like to sit in your class and take notes!
Your words bring up my desire to visit Alaska. This is what I see when I think of the mountains. What a beautiful description. The thought of the mountains actually crying. The mountains shedding their sorrows...freeing their spirits of regrets.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Mountains! I love mountain views.
I love the words you use in the second line.
"sharp cheeks of stone:"
Your haikus are inspiring! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 28, 2010
Last Updated on March 28, 2010
Tags: Haiku, Nature