Mountain of Regrets

Haiku

As large boulders weep,
Tears stream down sharp cheeks of stone:
Sobbing precipice.

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Brilliant ~

[Ruben Ortellao]

"Sobbing precipice" !!!! Terrific line, Haikulander! Outstanding piece, one of your best. Ruben.

[Journey]

I like to sit in your class and take notes!
Your words bring up my desire to visit Alaska. This is what I see when I think of the mountains. What a beautiful description. The thought of the mountains actually crying. The mountains shedding their sorrows...freeing their spirits of regrets.

[Thomas Fleet]

Mountains! I love mountain views.
I love the words you use in the second line.
"sharp cheeks of stone:"
Your haikus are inspiring! :)