Shards of Light

Shards of Light

A Poem by Raul Moreno


Rays of blinding sun,
Dapple through the gaps of leaves:
Kissing the shadows.

© 2010 Raul Moreno

Author's Note

Raul Moreno
Inspired by Sunflower's, 'Tender Leaves'

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As always, you provide a tasteful and descriptive haiku.
It's beautifully written and clearly expresses the beauty of Nature.
Astounding read. Never stop writing these amazing haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Ooh, this is nice! It's so simple yet captures the beauty of light-rays so perfectly! This is actually one of my favourite things about nature! When I'm on a walk in the morning and I stop to survey the way the light filters through the trees, it's amazing. And you have done an amazing job portraying that here~
Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago

The beauty of the sun and all it's best. DN

Posted 11 Years Ago

Great descriptiveness in this one Raul...Especially like the last line. Sara

Posted 11 Years Ago

Your picture goes well with ur Haiku. i like it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on March 31, 2010
Last Updated on March 31, 2010
Tags: Haiku, Nature

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