Snooze

Snooze

A Poem by robing123456
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The snooze button

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lying on a cloud, soft and warm,
woman around me, in a swarm, 
they dance around me, getting nude,
then the awakening, harsh and rude.
BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ 
it shrieks in an attempt to awaken,
all of a sudden, i was forsaken,
back to hell, 6:45
start to wish i was not alive.
Pressing snooze, i close my eyes,
drifting back to the clear blue skies, 
i sit down and crack a beer,
but then again my greatest fear.
i press again, again, again,
but i cant avoid this pain, 
i just cant win, i have to rise
and face the job that i despise. 

© 2013 robing123456


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This made me laugh!
Very good job, I know exactly what you're talking about here, something I fight with every morning.
Also, good job working with a set rhyme scheme, I personally have a hard time doing that, but you've pulled it off quite nicely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

robing123456

8 Years Ago

thanks for the comment



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Ha-ha! Love it you seem to have a knack for quite amusing poetry. :)
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

robing123456

8 Years Ago

thats the best mark i ever received! thanks
AWickedMoon

8 Years Ago

Any time ;)
This made me laugh!
Very good job, I know exactly what you're talking about here, something I fight with every morning.
Also, good job working with a set rhyme scheme, I personally have a hard time doing that, but you've pulled it off quite nicely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

robing123456

8 Years Ago

thanks for the comment

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Added on January 13, 2013
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