SNOW

SNOW

A Poem by Marie
"

I think this is what it looks like, anyhow...

"

 

Sprinkled sparkle, silver bright,

Curtain dropped in pearls of light.

© 2014 Marie


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Here is one I didn't see before, thinking of you Marie, Thinking of you and your family..
Missing You..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Me likee Marie! (and I know snow: Kentucky, Utah and Ohio and 20 below!)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

I can't even deal with ice, which is what we may have tomorrow...
Short, Consist, and very well writen, and can't describe this better
really good and enjoyable poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


An enchanting scene Marie. It's cold but from the inside looking out, it's a beauty.

Posted 5 Years Ago


It's beautiful, Marie, but you may need to move north.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Oh no. THe Southwest is where I make my home.
Marie,believe me snow is only nice when you are looking at it from a nice warm armchair.your discription was perfect.
Will

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

THanks. My late husband was from Canada; he had nothing particularly good to say about snow.
I like the alliteration in the first line, but I think the second line is more original.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm afraid none of my work is particlularly original.
i can't believe how much beauty you can pack into two lines.

the consonance is amazing...

as chilly as these words could be, they warm my heart on this cold night here in carbondale.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

Thank you. I am filling the chill right now.
WOW. short but beautiful work.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Stuck in blizzards of white,
Snowflakes shine in solo flight.

--hmm, not sure if it sounds good, but I wanted to write a tribute poem after reading that piece..:)




Posted 5 Years Ago


Marie

5 Years Ago

I would change the words just a bit to read: Snowflakes in blizzards of white/ Shining in solo fligh.. read more

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Marie

San Antonio, TX



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