A Poem by Marie

End of season...


Jeweled wings are ragged now

The time is almost done

Fairy angels end their lives

Dancing in the sun.

© 2015 Marie

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So sorry to hear that you have passed May it not be a dark night but a bright light Like yourself. May you be rocked in the arms of the Almighty to the beat of the lullaby winds.As all the souls of Heaven play a song so kind to the sound of the caroling winds. You have been a great friend to me.You have many great friends who have cried over you. May those tears fall from the heavens like notes from far flung rain to ring out the message you are loved.
Goodnight Marie.

Posted 7 Years Ago

11 of 11 people found this review constructive.


7 Years Ago

I know as I sympathised with you then xx
Tate Morgan

7 Years Ago

Seeing a parent pass away is one of the hardest pains we can endure. may you be blessed with a quiet.. read more
Monster ^.^

6 Years Ago

This is the first time I've heard of this. I'm always thankful to Marie. We haven't really conversed.. read more


Still today, the passage of time serves only to further venerate this beautiful brevity, still in my thoughts dear poetess Marie 🎀

Posted 3 Months Ago

you will live forever in the poetry that you wrote

Posted 1 Year Ago

Still resonates deep within, profound, prophetic poem, your wings now have a celestial texture as your fly with angels, still thinking of you Marie, down here on terra-firma

Posted 2 Years Ago

I feel still you are here.... Just as the sun rises, the moon smiles down to let us know we are safe. You are smiling ...still writing,.. always we feel you here.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Marie if only today could see what’s become if thus place we once called home. Sadly it has been in disrepair ever since the writers page was elimiminated. It never recovered. We miss you and your excellence

Posted 4 Years Ago

Blessed be , sweet Marie, thinking of you as 2019 is now upon us, farewell til we meet again.. 🌞

Posted 4 Years Ago

I miss you............................

Posted 5 Years Ago

Ah how I delight in all seasons, like life all kinds of trails n tribulations. thanks for this lovely poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Dancing in the sun would be a glorious way to go--for any of God's creatures.
While you rest in God's arms, Marie, your lovely words live on.

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, beautiful, charming.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on August 17, 2015
Last Updated on August 17, 2015
Tags: wings, jeweled, sun



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