There's something about her

There's something about her

A Poem by Roch Ketchum

There’s something about her,

Which doesn’t let me go,

And binds me to her through an eternal bond,

Which grows stronger and stronger as we go,

A spell put on by her magical wand.

There’s something about her,

Which makes me love her more and more,

As we move together on that path untraveled,

Like a drug addict without any cure,

I move by her side with a heart completely shattered.

There’s something about her,

Which still gives me those goosebumps,

Every time her hand brushes against mine,

She still makes me jump every time,

She sings that beautiful hymn.

There’s something about her,

Which gives me premature ventricular contractions,

Every time she sees me,

With that porcelain face having enchanting factions,

Brown eyes,full lips, soft cheeks, a beautiful she.

And as we walk in silence,

Our minds clouded,

With past probabilities and future possibilities,

The realization slowly starts to sink in.

And there she stands at the end of the path,

Her hair falling down on her face,hiding the pearls which drop onto the ground,

I hear a sob and then she waves,

Bidding me adieu.

As she goes away on the other path,

Crushing the dried leaves beneath her feet,

Adjusting her bangs,

I know finally what it is,

What the end result is.

It all rises up and flows down my eyes,

All the memories, wishes and moments,

Washed away in the flood,

And I star collecting those scattered broken pieces of my heart.

I lost everything to win,

Only to lose her all over again.

© 2017 Roch Ketchum


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binds me to her through an eternal bond,
Which grows stronger and stronger as we go,
A spell put on by her magical wand.
There’s something about her,
Which makes me love her more and more,
As we move together on that path untraveled,
Like a drug addict without any cure,


It's beautiful how we can love someone...

The ways we can love them...
I loved this one...thanks for sharing ...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Ria



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What a lovely poem. Very descriptive and honest. I wish everyone express their feelings like you do.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Najam
Najam Us Saher

5 Years Ago

You're welcome ☺
binds me to her through an eternal bond,
Which grows stronger and stronger as we go,
A spell put on by her magical wand.
There’s something about her,
Which makes me love her more and more,
As we move together on that path untraveled,
Like a drug addict without any cure,


It's beautiful how we can love someone...

The ways we can love them...
I loved this one...thanks for sharing ...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Ria
A great poem. The rhyme scheme was amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep it up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Sonakshi :D
It is a poem my friend. The words delicate and the description perfect.
"It all rises up and flows down my eyes,
All the memories, wishes and moments,
Washed away in the flood,
And I star collecting those scattered broken pieces of my heart."
The above lines. Amazing. Made the reader feel the emotions and the thoughts deeply. Thank you Roch for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Coyote. I am particularly very attached to the lines you mentioned above.
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

A very good poem and you are welcome.
ery filled with detail and emotion. Sad, yet intriguing. Well done!

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Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot 😊
Oh, that is sad ending. Also, is this personal experience? If it is you good job at showing the emotion. Good job showing emotion in general. I enjoyed this but it is still sad.

Great job. Loved reading it.

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Roch Ketchum

5 Years Ago

Yes it's kind of derived from my life only. Thanks a lot for reading this one :)
Brianna

5 Years Ago

Well great job on this.

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