the reason i left

fragile fingers, i held your hand

slowly, i dropped them

hoping to god, you'll understand

why i did.

 

fragile steps, i walked away

temporarily leaving

wishing on stars, you'll be ok

in the end.

 

fragile tears, fell from my eyes

catching my breath

letting you live, make up your mind

that's why i left.

 

that's the reason i left.

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

add acoustic guitar and there wont be a dry eye in the room.
Touching work.

[ShaneBerry]

there is a very serious tone of regret in this poem, a smooth rhyme scheme, and a solid ending. very inspireing work. thank you for shareing! :)

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[Dani]

nice to see you writing again-- the first stanza was the best.

[Sweets]

Great poem!
The first few lines were great :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very moving poem, written with perfect flow, excellent:)