Never Ending

Never Ending

A Poem by Rocknroll821
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This poem describes what i feel about a never ending friendship that i still have.

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Never Ending

i miss 
what we were
seeing their faces
and
hearing their voices

far away
but
still here
close to my
heart

 4 hours
tick tick tick
away

not alike
but 
very. very.
close

© 2011 Rocknroll821


Author's Note

Rocknroll821
This is dedicated to my 2 best friends that live 4 hours away from me because I moved away. Please tell me what you think!

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I love it..plus i can really relate. I moved away from all my childhood friends and my bff. Were still in touch tho so :). Hope you guys are still in touch also. Bff are good to keep by your heart no matter what. Sorry im blabbing. Anyway,you did well. Like i said,i love it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A relatable good poem and with nice format and description. Well done, I liked it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Moving away from friends is always a wrench - you grow differently despite not falling out with each other. Stay in touch with them any way you can.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Moving away from friends is always a wrench - you grow differently despite not falling out with each other. Stay in touch with them any way you can.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Posted 12 Years Ago


I like this, I thought you did a wonderful job,
Loved the ending.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it..plus i can really relate. I moved away from all my childhood friends and my bff. Were still in touch tho so :). Hope you guys are still in touch also. Bff are good to keep by your heart no matter what. Sorry im blabbing. Anyway,you did well. Like i said,i love it. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel ya on the moving thing. I moved from Iowa to Arkansas in my junior year and it was like a plant being uprooted forcibly from the ground. I like how you use the font to make your point. Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Columbia, MO



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