On a Winter Day

On a Winter Day

A Poem by Davi Rodrigues
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This is an old haiku of mine, that I wrote after looking at the sky during a winter day here in Brazil.

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There flies the white moon
Even being day its doom
It shows up at noon

© 2012 Davi Rodrigues


Author's Note

Davi Rodrigues
I kept the 5-7-5 pattern, but phonetically, not visually.
I know I didn't have to rhyme, it just happened.

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Beautiful Haiku , love the rhyme too.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 14, 2012
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Tags: Moon, Haiku, Analogy, Antithesis

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Davi Rodrigues
Davi Rodrigues

Brasilia, DF, Brazil



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