竜巻歩行者/Tornado Walker

竜巻歩行者/Tornado Walker

A Poem by Writer #00
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For those who walk among terror, hurt, and pain.

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竜巻歩行者
As if woven by Night, does he advance beneath the stars?

Listening intently to the whispers of fragile zephyrs?

Even if these whispers are but figments of his own imagination?

Could he possibly relate to others?  

See the pain and sorrow in their eyes?

"Absolutely" says he, but it is a falsehood of the heart?

Rippling cries, dripping lower

Until all the drops converge in a storm of dead emotions?

Winds always circumambulating about his translucent figure-- how could he-- why would he?

And the skies address him as a force?

This walker among terror, fear, and hurt?

Ah, it is but an act?

Really?  That stark countenance of his was rehearsed?

I don't believe it.

© 2015 Writer #00


Author's Note

Writer #00
A/N: I hope you read this as a phenomenon of nature. Whether it is a natural disaster or a natural wonder is not for me to say. Enjoy.

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This work took me a double take to understand the essence of. And I still don't know if I got it all... it gives a tepid feel... More like a natural disaster to me, than a natural wonder.

It's a great work. Would you mind explaining the notion(s) behind this poem?

Thank you:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Writer #00

5 Years Ago

Thank you much for reading, and I would most definitely not mind explaining what I had in mind for t.. read more
This is very meaning ful and deep it's
Sad and u can visualize it so clear this poem
Wonderful keep up writing:-100

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer #00

6 Years Ago

Thanks much; I meant it to be a bit bittersweet... : )
I love how the lines are oriented for the poem. Words are definitely meaningful. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer #00

6 Years Ago

Thanks. It's supposed to be a tornado-y shape.
Strong words bring strong emotion. These words do that. Nicely done

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer #00

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the feedback. I wasn't sure what emotions this would bring to others. It was inspire.. read more
I loved this and it's really well written and the japanese words are great~!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Writer #00

6 Years Ago

Thanks! It means a lot to me.
Rhianne Ney

6 Years Ago

You're welcome~!

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