Chapter I. This Sleeping PlanetA Chapter by Writer #00 Boy meets girl: Boy-->It has a gun. Girl-->I just want to be your friend. Duke: He’s been traveling for a
while. He doesn’t know where from.
Everything looks the same to him. He supposes it’s the same for anyone
else who travels. If anyone else travels. If anyone else is left on this planet,
aside from the bodies suspended in the water-colored gélatine of glass cylinders and things that
want to kill him. He’s used to being alone. He considers it relaxing, a necessity even. Maybe that’s because he’s been alone
for as long as he can remember.
Fourteen years. Fourteen
solitary years trekking across the desolate white of this sleeping planet. Only his conical hand drills, twilled
cloak, khaki shorts, and muddied rain boots that stopped above his knee. That was it. His body, some clothing, and an improvised weapon originally
used to bore into the ground, not harm those who trod on it. Then again, there weren’t many of those
anymore... He’s fine with that. He didn’t know what he would do if he met another
traveler. Chances are they’d be
trying to kill him just like all the other breathing (and a few electrical)
creatures he’d encountered so far. Chances are there’d be one less traveler to roam this dusty
planet. He didn’t know which of
them would best the other, but he doubted they’d take the time to make peace. That’s why he really, really hoped the generally humanoid
creature with the electric shotgun hadn’t seen him just now. Iris: She unstrapped Mortician from her back, letting the
leather fasteners hang from its side.
She aimed the tip of his bayonet at a shadow poking from behind a rusty
file cabinet partially submerged in dust and sand and ash. It was a mobile, anthropomorphic being,
judging by the shadow, and it wielded blades of some sort. She hoisted the gun over her shoulder,
not bothering to move the hair from her right eye. She could aim just fine with a broken sight and one eye. Her finger hovered near
the trigger, debating on whether or not the mysterious being was hiding or
waiting to pounce. One press of a
lever and the thing would be ash; she needed to make sure she wasn’t killing
anything worthwhile. For all she
knew, it could have been another scrap of lost prey like herself. It could also be a spiral-eyed Leiser. She glanced down at the
shadow again. A prey’s mistake, or
an inexperienced hunter’s.
Anything but a threat.
Still, though, she couldn’t lower her guard. “Who’s there?” She called, her voice cordial and
welcoming, not like she were luring the creature out of the shadows so that it
could make eye-contact with Mortician’s
long barrel. The thing didn’t
move. Smart, she thought, are you
hunter or prey? “Are you travelling?” she
asked. No answer. She took a risk, if only
because she desperately wanted to ease her loneliness, and set her shotgun
down. She wasn’t used to being
alone. She’d grown up with
somebody until the darkness came and she had to befriend Mortician.
Unfortunately, their friendship was formed too late and she couldn’t
keep from becoming alone. The
damned Leisers. She cursed at the
memory. Shivered. And eased closer to the
enigmatic creature behind the file cabinet. Hunter or Prey? Duke: He wouldn’t fall into its
trap. Its voice may have harbored
hospitality, it may have set the gun aside, but he didn’t trust it. He didn’t know what it planned to
do. What tricks it had up its
sleeve" literally. If he walked
out, if he answered it, who’s to say that it wouldn’t whip out some other
weapon, or take up its electric shotgun once more? There was one tiny hook between him and Death, and he wasn’t
about to close the gap.
He’d seen its attire: orange headphones slung around its neck, unnecessarily short, denim shorts that matched its sleeveless coat. It was the gold, Rabotte-fur collar that caught his attention. Rabottes were vicious creatures, creatures he’d had to set up elaborate traps in order to catch. The gold ones were smart, too, aside from strong. He’d never caught one. They’d see his traps before they set foot in them. Sometimes, they’d even destroy them. The fact that this variation of a humanoid had actually managed to kill one... He began to creep away
from the file cabinet, but he didn’t know where else to go. The other bits of disoriented signs of
past life were either buried by dust or too far away for him to go unnoticed. He put his hands in his
drills, clutching the grip inside of them, preparing to attack the thing. He leapt from behind the file cabinet
and charged soundlessly, one of his drills thrust forward, whirring menacingly. The creature’s visible left eye widened
and she gasped as the rotating tip reflected in her eye. Iris: She hadn’t expected such
an open attack. She’d assumed by
its behavior that it was more of a long-distance pseudo-fighter. She only had too little time to react
before her eye was gouged out by a surprisingly swift boy. She dropped into a back
bend, the arm-and-drill of her adversary whizzing over her in a blur. She flung her foot up as she
back-flipped into a split-second splits and rose to her feet again, having put
at least two legs of distance between he and her. Or so she’d thought.
The boy was too quick, already jabbing at her body. She barely had time to evade the sharp
movements (to save her breasts from being punctured) when another series of
rapid strikes would be tossed at her. She could hunt Rabottes,
but they were large and slow when bipedal. This guy was almost inhuman. She
wanted to shout ‘stop’, but all her energy was being put into avoiding those
wicked twin drills and slowly easing him into her trap. Just a few more steps
forward, there you go, she thought as the sole of her tattered flip-flop bumped
the end of Mortician. Okay, Iris, now think. His left-hand drill sent a
few strands of her white hair falling past her eye. She gulped, and she had the right to, for his other arm had
been guiding a drill to her stomach.
Iris flipped from prey to hunter in under an instant, grabbing Mortician by its barrel and swinging it
between her body and the spiraling drill. CLANG. Duke: The force he’d put into
what he’d assumed would be the final blow ricocheted off of the thing’s
makeshift shotgun-shield. The
energy sent a wave of momentary shock through his right arm, causing him to
wince mentally. A tiny fraction of
distorted attentiveness. Just enough
for a Rabotte-killer. Its hand shot out, grabbing his wrist and managing to
send the dirty expanse of inorganic junk spinning from below his feet to
kissing his face. He tried to get up, but it
had his arms in a tight lock, immobilizing his feet with its own. “I could’ve killed you,
you know,” the humanoid thing reminded him, releasing him, “but I’m letting you
go. Foolishly, probably. I
wouldn’t be surprised if you used my ignorant kindness to your advantage and
stuck one of those things"“ it pointed at the hand drills that were now lying
on an old mint case, “in my back the moment its turned.” Warily, he rose to his
feet, brushing the dirt from his sun-bleached cloak and watching the thing from
over its over-tall collar. They both stood there for
a bit, analyzing the other. “So you’re not going to
kill me after all, eh?” the Iris concluded, folding its shotgun down into its
more convenient form. He shook his head. No, he wasn’t going to anymore. Maybe having a partner that reflexive and
agile and lethal wouldn’t be a bad
idea. He liked his solitude, true,
but that was only because he’d never tried having company. It was all
he’d known for the past fourteen years that were his life. He thought back to the
Rabottes and Lun Châts that had almost taken his life many times
over. The days of worrying in a
sheet-metal cave, black rain finding undetectable cracks to seep through. The cold nights of the months of Frimaire
and Nivôse when he had to sleep
without a fire at the sight of tracks that bore a likeness to those of
Leisers. The moments when he was
starving and thoroughly drenched in despair. The moments he thought: why don’t I just lay here in the
cold, let the murky snow be my blanket... “Are you a traveler?” His voice was raspy, in need of lubrication from infrequent
use. It shrugged.
“I travel, yes, but it’s really more of aimless wandering.” He didn’t reply. Do I have a goal? He wondered. “What do you say we stick together?” It asked “You and me. Watch each others’ backs, care for one another
in sickness, all that goodstuff.” He analyzed it once more. A foldable electric shotgun worn on its back, it’s spear-bayonet
clipped to the side of its dark-blue shorts. That gold Rabotte’s fur. It would either be an alliance, no matter how unstable, or
another meeting, next time with Death.
“Sure.” And the two set off together over the dunes of
metallic waste as the dull sun rose to its pathetic zenith. --Chapter I. This Sleeping Planet © 2013 Writer #00Author's Note
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