Waiting

Waiting

A Poem by Lina
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The cons of a certain type of waiting.

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To wait is to exterminate all your urges to create, it becomes that you are delegating your time to procrastinating.  

I’ll give you some advice; don’t wait. 

When you wait, you are killing all your juices, you’re drying all your crying, and you’re dying! Stop and think, but don’t wait. Take your time to become and do, but never wait. If you get it, then start it. If you don’t, then find it. 

To wait is such a passionless attempt to live and forgive all your senses in their trances and their dances. 

I’ll give you some advice; don’t wait!

Never wait! State all the contents of your heart when you start to feel and appeal to the dire senses. Create all your diamonds with the silence of your thinking and your desire to create. 

And smile! Do it with a smile, do it patiently and thoughtfully, as slowly as you want, but don’t halt all the working and the doing and the smiling! Be happy! Be dappy and dapper, with a tiny hint of snapper! 

I’ll give you some advice; don’t wait!

© 2011 Lina


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Author's Note

Lina
I don't usually play with rhymes very much, but it kinda seemed to flow here... whether or not it works is up to you! :)

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Ian
This poem does flow well. It gives the reader much advise and is very helpful. I love it! Great job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This one flows well, although the rhyme is somehow weird, sounds more like proses than verses, moreover spoken words. I like the wisdom it holds.
Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think it works real well! I also like how the theme of your poem is the opposite of your title

It was an enjoyable read, I liked the rhyming and flow of the entire and overall it was amazing and gives some helpful advice to people

Nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on August 31, 2011
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