anticipation

anticipation

A Poem by roma20
"

soft, dear heart

"
youth

still water 
poised

a lick 
of wind

a twitch
of fin

shivering
ripples

wreck the
being 

© 2020 roma20


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roma20
Hey, guys do give me your thoughts

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A very spare but evocative offering, this one. The first several stanzas seem to speak of the fragile but genuine hopes of youth; then the last one abruptly dashes those hopes. Sometimes life is that way.

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roma20

1 Week Ago

Hi John, your review was a new way for me to look at the poem. I wished to evoke the fretting nature.. read more
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I like the comparison and the form. The poem speaks of how slight influences can have great effects. Well done in so few words. Good writing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


roma20

1 Week Ago

Hi Fabian, Thank you for reading. The butterfly effect truly drives our lives.

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MUMBAI, Maharashtra, India



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