A poet's dream

A poet's dream

Writers write and poets dream, lovers lost in endless seems.

A touch a sigh, what will they see.

The world laughs at poets dreams.

They do not know the pain I feel when once I dreamed a poet's tale.

A breath a sigh, is all I have, come to me and stay for a while.

I will tell you of a moonlit night, of how we loved and how we cried.

The pain we felt when they dragged us off, all because our love would last.

Writers write and poets dream, what will they say if we dared to dream.

To write our souls in endless words, dare we take the timeless trail.

Lost in words our dreams come alive, don’t take this form me…for it gives me life.

  

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

What a wonderful poem, ron. I have also those words in my mind when I first enter in this world of writers. This is really every poet's dream: "To write his soul in endless words, dare he take the timeless trail."

I just want to make a suggestion about the format of this poem. Since there is ryhming...for me, this could have been better if the rhymes are really visible in each line. So, this is how I wish to be the format of this piece:

Writers write and poets dream,
Lovers lost in endless seems.
A touch, a sigh, what will they see.
The world laughs at poets dreams.

They do not know the pain I feel
When once I dreamed a poet's tale.
A breath, a sigh, is all I have
Come to me and stay for a while.

I will tell you of a moonlit night
Of how we loved and how we cried.
The pain we felt when they dragged us off
All because our love would last.

Writers write and poets dream
What will they say if we dared to dream.
To write our souls in endless words
Dare we take the timeless trail.

Lost in words our dreams come alive
Don’t take this form me…for it gives me life. ----typo: form should be from

Anyway, it's up to you if you will consider this or not because you are still the master of your own creation. Mine is just a suggestion. My intention is just to help but still you have all the control in it, my dear.

But other than that, this is really wonderful. You are a poet in your own way, ron. Keep it up.

[ron]

Thank you very much for your kind words and advice. I hadnt noticed the typo thank you for bringing it to my attention.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're very much welcome. Even I wish that there's someone who would help me improve my works. Nowadays, honesty in reviewing declines as I see it. More of us here solely interpret and react with the article... while one of the aims of posting a piece here is to improve it. Sometimes, reviewing becomes a concealed duty so in order to fulfill such, you have to type some words then post it...presto, you have done your part without adding anything but getting the points in posting a comment. Lol.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[ron]

Thank you so much. Im very happy you injoyed it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome ...:)........

[ron]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Emberlorna]

This is so beautiful...you've captured the essence and reason of being a poet in the most enchanting way...each line evokes a specific emotion that roams around a poet's mind and soul... I especially like the last line it really brings it all together

"Lost in words our dreams come alive, don’t take this form me…for it gives me life."

[ron]

Thank you so much for your kind words.