This is me (I am this poem)

This is me (I am this poem)

I am a man in need of true love.

Not the kind you find in every day-to-day life.

 

The love that is of the purest kind.

A love that allows us to submit too over time.

 

To explore each other’s deepest wants, desires, and needs.

Like a feast to devour by you and me.

Do I have needs that others do not see? Yes, my future lover I do indeed.

 

For my passions’ are great and my love it must wait, for some small resemblance of antiquated love to show me the way.

 

I will shower you with kisses and trinkets for you to taste.

You will never question my devotion, love will not hesitate.

 

Do you wish to be bound to the bed like a feast? Or lay there with me to love, like a breath of fresh air wanting to breathe.

 

I will not blanch or recoil from your desirers. I will embrace them and make them ours.

This I promise with all my heart. Please be careful with my heart for it is all that I have, and I have wasted the hours.

Author's Note

This is who I am. It is not just a poem but the real me.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Ron, if you are seeking true love - well, you may have a bit of a wait ahead of you. :) I, too, believe as you, that there really and truly is a wonderful person out there. But here is some advice my Dad gave me years ago.

Strange, but take it to heart. Whatever we are seeking, no matter what it is - is also seeking us. Never forget that, and it will make the journey to find your heart's desire, whatever it may be, that much easier.

[ron]

I know that. And I also know that the journy will take any one who chooses to go on it to places they never thought they would be. Maybe this pne is just whishfull thinking...lol.

[dw817]

Perhaps, but what was it Spock once said ?
"After a time, you may find that having is not so pleasing a thing, after all, as wanting. It is not logical, but it is often true." :)

[ron]

LOve I ahve found is not logical...lol.

[dw817]

But it is true. :7

[Lexi Villanueva]

This put a smile to my face to see so much
Emotion and love in this poem. Beautiful and
Brilliant and wonderful. Such tranquility.-100

[ron]

Thank you so much.And like the poem says...it is me.

[ThoughtsofShyann]

I love it it was pure beauty! It was very heart felt!

[ron]

thanky ou very much.

[Riding the Rainbow]

Really good expression of your feelings..
This is how I feel about love so I'm happy to know that there are people out there that feel like I do about love..
Well done;)

[ron]

Thank you. And yes there some of us who do, yet I fear that most of us do not allways expres it out of fear or something else.

[Christopher Angel]

This is so sappy! If I were a teenage girl I'd gush. Fortunately I'm neither so you're save! Good job with the rhyming. Your stanzas flowed nicely into the next and painted a very compact mushy yet earnest story of who you want to portray yourself as.

[ron]

I wish more women would read it...lol. Thank you for your review. Its nice to know there are those who understand it.

[Blissful Sin]

:') You explained me perfectly! Lovely!

-Blushing Bliss

[ron]

Ah so I'm not the olny one who feels this way...lol. You have ny deepest respect and admeration on the matter. :)

[Wall of Words]

Very nice. I love how out the beginning you come straight out and say you need love. Not many guys will do that. They'll hide it, or disguise it, or something... it's nice to know some guys aren't afraid to show their sentimental, romantic side. :) The poem was put together very nicely. The rhythm, the choice of words.. I feel like I really have learned about how romantic you are simply from this poem. :)

"Please be careful with my heart for it is all that I have, and I have wasted the hours. "

It's beautiful. :)
Sylvia.

[ron]

Thank you. Your words are very much welcome. I just wish more would read it...well heres hoping. :)

[RainDancer1997]

AWW:) Its beautiful! What every girl wants:)

[ron]

Apperently not, if my relationship in the past have shown me.

[RainDancer1997]

Some people are selfish and careless to others feelings.

[ron]

Thats why Im hoping to find some one who understands poetry and writes it. I have found that at least poets who write about love and broken hearts know what a broken heart truely is and would charish every thing about love. I did not come here to find love but yet I have fallen in love with some of the poems I have read. If that makes sense.

[RainDancer1997]

It makes since:)

[ron]

Know any lol.

[RainDancer1997]

SquinklaPsyOps shes great:)

[ron]

I know her writings very deep and profound. I must confess that if I were to find some one that I liked like that I would be to much a coward to confied in them how I felt. Alas the story of my life.

[RainDancer1997]

She's my best friend and has helped me so much:) She's really good at what she does:) I'm very straight forward with everything.

[ron]

I understand. But I can give my love to the one that asks for it ...only if they truely want it.

[RainDancer1997]

I get attached to someone to fast

[ron]

I do to. Its hard when some one does not return your love the way you do.

[RainDancer1997]

OR they say they do and then they take it away. When you love someone truly your emotions do not just dissapear

[ron]

This is so true. You have loved and the other persone has changed...correct? If that is true then they did not love you for who you are.

[RainDancer1997]

Yeah I've been through it recently... sucks but life moves on I guess

[ron]

But love is constent. Love dies carry the day for those that do find it. I have to belive it or I should be the one love stubles on through.

[RainDancer1997]

Love never dies it just turns to hate... got that off of a friends poem, and its true

[ron]

Love never dies. It only turns to hate when the heart is hardedd. Please dont ever think that.

[RainDancer1997]

I used to think that honestly, but then I realized it goes away when you forgive them for hurting you and move on

[ron]

So ture. It does. So much I want to say. But I wont.

[RainDancer1997]

that's ok:)