You

You

 

I sit wondering how I should feel.

My thoughts of you fill me and make me complete.

 

Your thoughts touch me deep inside.

A touch of your whisper makes me sigh.

 

Yours eyes construct my desires, making them yearn for more.

Just a thought of your love quenches my thirsty soul.

 

How should I feel when you are everywhere?

You are in…

my thoughts…

my breath…

my feelings…

my desires.

 

You are deep in my heart you make me whole again.

You give me life in ways I have not lived.

Reviews

[dw817]

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If I was gonna be straight with you I would say - you need a girl. ;) But I am reading the words and they are very tender and heartfelt sentiments.

But yes, being with a friend/mate/lover/mistress/ (toymaster ?), will always make you experience life in ways you never knew.

[ron]

OK. Whats a toymaster?

[dw817]

I'm not sure but Rose does seem to master those toys. :D

[ron]

OH that's not even funny.

[dw817]

As Mr. Incredible says, "I have time." Woke up super early this morning so I'll be ready for Rose.read moreAs Mr. Incredible says, "I have time." Woke up super early this morning so I'll be ready for Rose.

I'm not sure what toys you are referring to, but these are mine from upstairs as I'm a bit of a collector of cute and rare things. And yes, That's a Hamtaro Pinball Machine I found at the dollar store years ago.

As for Rose's own toys she doesn't bring any of them by, except a new Teddy Bear for me occasionally as a gift, I'll prolly get a new Halloween one today when I see her. She already sent me a cute Halloween card earlier in the week.
http://bit.ly/1hrcXZz

[dw817]

BTW, if the above just says, 'read more' use Firefox browser. Opera doesn't seem to like Writer's Cafe. Later I'll have to write something about this.

[dw817]

Wrong link, here, yes, I'm waking up. :D
http://bit.ly/16LlRC3

[ron]

OK. But I dont have any problems when I use the read more.

[dw817]

Well that's good. Some browsers do. One thing I did in my time working for others was to debug existing systems. Sort of an efficiency adviser. And since I've written databases in my time too I am always finding ways of improving an existing Internet systems either through kludges,
http://bit.ly/USLL4
Or developing my own system entirely. Some browsers do indeed have problems with Writer's Cafe. I know Xanga had several bugs in it and by bringing them to the attention of the owners they did in fact repair the most serious ones which was good.

[ron]

Your much smarter with computers than I am.

[dw817]

Not really. Just more patient. I think I have a good deal of patience with people but little to none with computers - and as such I am always finding a way of getting them to work quickly, efficiently, and correctly - no matter what. And I've made that a bit of my hobby and profession. :)

[ron]

I get confused when I think about computers. It just doesn't make a lot of sense to me.

[dw817]

It's a patience and permutation thing - you just sit down with a program or a computer and experiment on simple stuff till you get results. Go through every possible condition and collection of patterns until you have tries absolutely everything and have learned everything possible from it.

I've geared myself to learning permutations for any new computer software program so no stone is unturned. I examine every single configuration option available and read and re-read all of the help files and turn to Google to see if there is anything unlisted additionally.

Wow, I am really dizzy. I am having an inner ear problem and I tried to get up and fell out of my chair just now and had trouble getting back up. No problem just - very dizzy and my left ear hurts and aches a lot. I schededled an appt to see the Ear Dr tomorrow at 9:40am so I'll definitely be gone for a few hours. May lie down after lunch. It's really bad.

Was hoping to post a buncha kid-pictures for Halloween but this dizziness wants me to lie down or something, may close early for the day.

[ron]

Ok all the computer language you just said made me dizzy lol...I'm just not wired for computers.

[dw817]

Permutations are good to know, not just for computers but for everything in life.
http://bit.ly/1frOlB
The 3-colored balls was something I wrote out on paper when I was 9-years old using symbols, Dad said it was notta new idea (which I hated cause I believed I made up a new way to think of things) but that he was delighted I was interested with, and told me the word for the first time - permutations. And then we both looked up the word in the dictionary and we talked about it for several hours. Those were the happiest moments I was with my Dad, when he was teaching me cool stuff like this.

It was then I realized you could use permutations and deductive reasoning to solve answers to really anything in life without even having to know the questions involved for them or to research their background. If something worked anywhere, anywhere at all, I could reproduce the results myself and not even have to understand the question or code or protection scheme so long as I took the time to explore the permutations of the data involved.

I do this today for instance to post protected streaming movies using immensely complex HTML coding and a little research into the permutations of standard Internet streamed data with a program I wrote to dissect their ciphers for them.
http://bit.ly/v7ajX

OK, definitely closing up for the day. Will be in tomorrow after seeing the Ear Dr - hopefully in better shape to do more comments, RRs and posts.

[icelandicblue]

This is a lovely piece of poetry. We are only part of a whole and we all need someone to make us complete. You've expressed that here with heart.

[s y e]

YOU are an amazing writer Ron - this is a great piece. I love how when you write it sometimes reads as if you have written it for your audience. Your writing is captivating.

"Yours eyes construct my desires, making them yearn for more.
Just a thought of your love quenches my thirsty soul."

-- These are my favourites lines.

Loved this.

[ron]

Thank you. -blushing- I just start writing and it just kind of flows out. Kind of like a trance, it's hard to explain.

[s y e]

I understand, you're an amazing poet, keep it up!

[ron]

Ok your going to make me blush so hard I'll look like a lobster lol. Thank you for your very kind words.

[s y e]

Hahahahaha, that made me laugh big time!

[ron]

It makes my freckles hide lol.

[s y e]

Hahaha, my make up hides my freckles.

[ron]

I'm not putting on any foundation so blush will have to do.

[s y e]

That would be a funny picture!

[ron]

blushing or the foundation?

[s y e]

You wearing foundation.

[ron]

Hmm let me see...nope not a drop for me thank you.

[s y e]

Bummer.....! ;-P

[ron]

Don't tell me you want to put make-up on me?

[s y e]

Yes please! :D

[ron]

lol. Maybe if you could make me look like a male witch for Halloween. After all I am Wicca, so that could work.

[s y e]

LOL, done. I will do your make up for Halloween.

[ron]

Lol.Ok just nothing to crazy.

[s y e]

Gotcha! ;-)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Lovely write, I especially enjoyed the last line. Kudos!

[ron]

Thank you Sharon.

[Me]

Oh so very beautiful,captivating read Ron :) x

[ron]

Thank you.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Very very deep. That's how it is when you get totally smitten with someone

[ron]

Yes it is, it hurts and feels good at the same time.

[shallimarRose]

Ron I always feel your poetry so deeply.. You write like you are writing directly to your audience and that is very strong and thought provoking for many including me I think. I love this line..
"Yours eyes construct my desires, making them yearn for more"... that 's a power in itself.. loved this one. shallimarRose

[ron]

Thank you...imagine if I did write to some one. One day maybe...:)

[SyberRose]

You are deep in my heart you make me whole again.
You give me life in ways I have not lived

Enjoyed Ron...nicely penned piece from your heart...Rose

[ron]

Thank you very much.

[Dye]

You are quite the romantic Ron. I like this one :)

[ron]

Thank you Dye :)

[Sheila Kline]

Yearning, wishing, wondering.........all wrapped up in the lines of your poem. Rebirth is found in such desires! Your last line captures the total essence of your need for this person!

[ron]

Thank you. I wish I could express it all completly, but I fear that would end up being on ongoing novle.