Your Emerald Isle…kiss

Your Emerald Isle…kiss

 

So this is it. This is the one night you will change who I am.

One night, one night you tell me.

 

I follow you to the meeting place.

The place you will take me where a world makes…

Dreams, come true.

 

You lay me down on the alter and bind me to the pedestals.

You undress me with your thoughts and smile.

 

You kiss my heart and my mind starts to swirl.

Thoughts of pure bliss fill my head.

 

I wait for you to rescue my desires from the dark places it has lived.

My eyes plead for salvation, salvation that only you can save me from.

 

The road of my life is filled with potholes, cracks, and dead ends.

You came in and swept me from the sadness that consumed my life for so long.

 

Did you plan this in your mind?

Did you beg for me to stay?

Did you ever think I would come so fast?

 

What if I never answered you Emerald Isle…

Kiss?

Author's Note

Reviews

[dw817]

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No, love is never expected. It is the fortunate happening to the unfortunate. The luck happening to the luckless. It can never be predicted or planned. When you meet it, you must thrust your whole body into it, fully forward, eyes wide shut, your arms outstretched.

If it is true love, you will be caught. If not, you will drown in the tears of the ocean below. One or the other awaits you. :)

[ron]

I believe that you are correct.

[dw817]

Sometimes I wear a life preserver, even out in the open, just in case - you never know when love will hit. :D
http://bit.ly/15Oryt1

[ron]

Lol. I have no doubt that you do.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Truly a passionate write. Your emotion is thick and sincere throughout this piece, well done!

[ron]

Thank you heroics.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was a pleasure.

[ms. barrie]

Briiliantly vibrant, sensual sensory delight of a write
You penned here. Amazing job!. Thanks for sharing :)

~ Barrie Joy

[ron]

-Blushing- thank you Joy.

[ms. barrie]

You welcome Ron, this is a gorgeous write, was a pleasure to read :)

[ron]

Thank you very much.

[ms. barrie]

You welcome, very much :)

[Me]

wonderfully sensual, enjoyed :) x

[ron]

Thank you.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

Vivid and sensual imagery. Enjoyed!

[ron]

Thank you.

[FlatLineBeauty]

Lovely and sensual xo Winter

[ron]

Thank you Winter

[Stevo The POE-t]

Really great job here... I really enjoyed reading it... Thanks for sharing...

[s y e]

This is great Ron - A different write from you and it's great. You know your link or video isn't working.

[ron]

Thank you. Some one sent the link to me and I cant figure out how to add it or if it's the right one.

[s y e]

I can tell you if you'd like?

[ron]

Sure that would be great.

[s y e]

Is it a picture you're posting?

[ron]

No its the song video by White Horse called Emerald Isle

[s y e]

Okay so on Youtube type the song, click 'share' then 'embed' and copy the code into here. Sometimes to you need to edit it again for it to work

[s y e]

Here's the code:

[ron]

Got it. Thank you

[Dye]

"You lay me down on the alter and bind me to the pedestals.

You undress me with your thoughts and smile."

I really did enjoy this one Ron. Glad to see you are back at it. :)

[ron]

Thank you Dye. I hated being in that slump.

[Dye]

It happens to us all. Welcome back.

[ron]

Thank you.

[Ruth]

This is different for you hon. Really vivid details. Much enjoyed xx