The “Hello”

The “Hello”

A Poem by ron

The “Hello”

 

 

It started with a word “Hello”,

I hadn't planned to go down that road.

 

But there it was as plain as can be,

the hello that started my heart to beat.

 

Then it was “how have you been”,

now this alone was not the end.

 

Soon the meanings changed,

“I haven’t seen you in a while,

was thinking about you while you were gone”.

 

I thought to my self “what a sweet person they are,

to think of me all this time”.

 

Then the words really started to change,

“how come you did say hi, or tell me that you would be gone for such a long time”?

 

Then I started to see,

what this person was feeling for me.

 

This can’t be right I told myself,

“no one has paid much attention to me in such a long while”.

 

But there it was,

my heart beat every time I saw them on.

 

Now it beats out of control,

it all started with just a “hello”.

 

© 2014 ron


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Great storytelling of the heart sir.... It is funny how the smallest things can mean so much...

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Thank you April. Yes it is.
AprilRN1210

6 Years Ago

You're welcome:)
This was beautiful. Xo Winter

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Thank you Winter xo
The power of such a simple word .You have written this beautifully my dear :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya. Sometimes it's the simplest things in life that can mean so much more. :)
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

That is true .You are welcome :)
Such a simple way it starts. Well put. One minor thing, planned instead of planed :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Thank you KL. Ah I will have to change it, thank you again :))
Sometimes all it takes is a little hello and boom, you're hooked. Who would have known that all you needed was a simple 'hello' ???

So romantic again.

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Sometimes a "Hello" can mean more than we know...
s y e

6 Years Ago

It can indeed.
Sometimes all it takes is a hello.... and there is a spark. You expressed this so well Ron. Great romantic write. ;-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Thank you Red. ;-)
It's amazing what can blossom from meeting someone new. The word hello leads to new places, friendships, and possible partners. It takes you on new adventures. Never fear the word "hello", shout it from the rooftops!
This is a fantastic write about what can come from meeting someone new. Beautiful write, Ron! xo (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


ron

6 Years Ago

Thank you Madalyn. Yes some times the most wonderful word in the world can be a simple "hello". To m.. read more

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