A letter to my daughter

A letter to my daughter

 

If the taste of love hurt in the worst way...then I would love to taste it...but the pain of it all will burn deep in my soul.

Would the curves of it all love still feels more than I am.

I will give my all to you.

Could you not feel something...anything in your heart.

I remember when you jumped into my arms when I landed after we came back from GETMO.

It brings tears to my face...tears of joy.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand the poem. I was deployed often in my 15 year active. I came home from Honderas after one year. My daughter jump the safety gate and ran to me. These are the things we remember. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Thank you Coyote. Yes those are the times that we hold dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Aprille]

The man a daughter admires with all her heart is her father. :)
This is a really sweet poem.

[ron]

Thank you very much. I hope she still does.

[Aprille]

Of course. :)

[ron]

Thank you ;)

[Ian Gilmour]

The words are carefully chosen and this is very important in writing. It's funny how one word or one sentence can change an entire poem, even an entire book. "The curves of it all" in this case, showing that long doesn't have corners, it doesn't reach an end line, it is circular, infinite. Good work.

[ron]

Thank you Ian. You are completely right about how a word or sentence can change the writing.

[Anne Timmins]

Your emotions are wonderfully penned and freely they shine... I really am touched by these words

[ron]

Thank you Anne.

[Sreenath]

dad ! a daughters first hero ... great emotion filled words.. i really enjoyed feeling the words :)

[ron]

Thank you Shree

[Alfred Kukitz]

A father's heart and soul to his daughter in sweeping tear felt beauty.

[ron]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Ruth]

Lamentful piece Ron, very much so, brought a tear to my eyes...beautifully voiced x

[ron]

Didn't mean to make you cry Ruth...sorry.
Thank so much.

[Ruth]

Hon, what are words for if not to move someone ;) ♥

[ron]

So very true sweet Ruth.

[Lyn Anderson]

A very sad, heartfelt piece Ron.

[ron]

Thank you KL. Xo

[Konigin]

aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwww
this is so sweet and heartfelt Ron...
It made tears creep into my little eyes!!!

[ron]

Thank you and Im sorry I didn't mean to make you tear up.

[Konigin]

You are welcome
And oh! Its fine. They were good tears! :)

[ron]

-Smiles- ok :)

[Konigin]

*grins* okay!

[Matching Socks]

Very very moving poem/letter.

[ron]

Thank you Ance.