Recreate Yourself.

Recreate Yourself.

A Poem by RonnieBreight

Grow your own heart.

Soak it in gold.

Lock it away.

Do what you're told.

 

Make your own soul.

Inhale bright blue.

Savor the scene.

Forget what to do.

 

Raise your own eyes.

Spill out the pain.

Retry just once.

See what you gain.

 

Write down your words.

Let hands unwind.

Lose haunting fear.

Maybe they'll mind.

 

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© 2010 RonnieBreight


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"Grow your own heart. / Soak it in gold."
I loved those two lines and just the idea of a heart being pure and beautiful when you nurture it yourself.

"Make your own soul. / Inhale bright blue."
Again, beautiful. The bright blue reminds me of a clear spring sky, something so innocent and just overall amazing to look at.

And, of course, the title says it all. Recreating oneself is hard to do, but you've provided a poetic and beautiful way of doing so. Great job! (:

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that is f*****g dope, my favorite is the second stanza for sure!!!


Posted 9 Years Ago


wow, so beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


i like this poem its a great write all the way around !11

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was a really great piece. I think this was a great message as well in this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a great wisdom you have shared with us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I see alot of emotion in this.. very creative.. enjoyed dearly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Write down your words.
Let hands unwind.
Lose haunting fear.
Maybe they'll mind.

This is so beautiful. Its amazing how you paint a picture, a soft calling dare.

Posted 10 Years Ago


cute. Short and sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is incredible Ronnie. 100 from me! This just made me feel so content :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a positive way to begin the day!
This is what I'll take with me:
Grow your own heart
Make your own soul
Raise your own eyes
Write down your words

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Tags: heart, gold, lock, told, sould, blue, scene, do, eyes, pain, once, gain, words, unwind, fear, mind
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