It has ended

It has ended

A Story by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
"

'my time has come.....it has ended'

"

 


Eli Eli Sabachthani, my AlienGod...

why have you forsaken me!? 

To be ridiculed and spat-at by those who once welcomed me warmly?



    To taste stinging vinegar to numb this excruciating pain...?


to have it dabbed on these bloody wounds to sting my flesh  again...??



the lashing didn't hurt as much as did the pouring rain of tears she shed in vain...
Magdalene was she and not my mothers God-child but may be my god your own star-child she just might be...though simply named Mary...poor simple mary...


                              


Father let her merrily merry be...but let her not marry ...for she is the light of your mystery...help cease her confused mind from earthly worry...

wash her far away from faaaaaar away from                Pilate's soap and water mockery from the land to the sea...kindly end her misery...


and mum and dad...

know this that i love you dearly...


May Heaven forgive me...

          'my time has come.....


  it has almost ended!' 


 I must now hurry...

 

                      


© 2013 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
Inspired by a poet friend at WC

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INTRODUCTION

The beauty of such artwork never ceases to amaze me, dear poet.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

1. Your AlienGod has not forsaken you.
2. Your AlienGod has e m b r a c e d you.
3. Your AlienGod is an Ancient Alien from the History Channel.

love,
ria

p.s. Wonderful work:D twas all she wrote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

oh sory..i guess i had heard wronf yes asland it is
Vria P Crow

8 Years Ago

haha I forget names allll the time! I focus more on the image rather than names.
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

thaz good too in a wy or other



Reviews

i have always wanted to open a poem exactly like that...damn! absolutely powerful

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tangible and good to see you :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


INTRODUCTION

The beauty of such artwork never ceases to amaze me, dear poet.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

1. Your AlienGod has not forsaken you.
2. Your AlienGod has e m b r a c e d you.
3. Your AlienGod is an Ancient Alien from the History Channel.

love,
ria

p.s. Wonderful work:D twas all she wrote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

oh sory..i guess i had heard wronf yes asland it is
Vria P Crow

8 Years Ago

haha I forget names allll the time! I focus more on the image rather than names.
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

thaz good too in a wy or other
I can only hope that the road to suffering leads to a better place. I am moved by your poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

being an empath you will feel for many like the way you feel for me and i am moved to by your kind w.. read more
Very interesting. (: I liked how you worked it. ^_^ Good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

i am happy for your like and interest and again i am grateful for your kind visit
A truly unique piece...but then I expect nothing less from your pen. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

i am glad my pen lived up to your expectations. Pls thank you from me for being my friend.
KAOlmsted

8 Years Ago

It always does...and it is my absolute pleasure!
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

:)
I like this. Very engaging indeed. I like the layout you used as well. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Thank u Tina...now u know we are 2 peas in a pod...
A story that flowed like a poem... hmm strong n nicely portrayed..


Posted 8 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

can be can be not memory is 50/50
smilempsn

8 Years Ago

:P :)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

-=-
the lashing didn't hurt as much as did the pouring rain of tears she shed in vain...

This is inarticulately profound.

Posted 8 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

thank you friend Boehm...it will identify i am sure:)
Wow a park ride of a poem, I enjoyed it! Especially the part about Mary. That was beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

8 Years Ago

Dear Poe i have seen you after ages.welcome to my pages:)

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