My dear lady but not mine

My greeting and salutations to all adventurous women

My dear lady and not mine...

Reviews

[Corrupthoughts]

Smooth and I like the tale it speaks of. Your style of language is rare to find these days and I like how you incorporate it. The only thing I would suggest is to break up your piece in stanzas instead of one big paragraph. it's easier to read that way and gives it the flow it deserves.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes I shall do that C....thx u

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Your writing style is nothing I've seen before, unique I would say. Great job, along with a great flow.(:

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Erin your compliment is like nothing i received before...:thanku girl

[Francesca]

Some beautiful words in here and and I especially like the line at the end, "You're very very much alive.."
Great poem!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks Franseca....i wish u to be very very very much alive your whole life thru:)

[Jasmine]

this is very unusual. a nice flow and interesting subject matter. moony-woony work! :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Moony woony it is July and jus for u:) thxx

[..]

Unique and lovely rhyming. Like the picture used.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes thanks so much

[Ruth]

This is almost surreal and the use of language is actually quite refreshing :) Well used hon!
xx

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks Poppy...i know its a great compliment that coming from you:)

[Liza]

adorable declaration of recognition to feminine wiles and your admiration to their expressional freedom - i sensed your humor. sweet

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks this is really so cool to receive such adulation from the fairer sex...:) thanks ma`am

[Liza]

welcome :)