Burn my hands young flame

you know what I mean

Burn my hands Young-Flame

Reviews

[Rogue]

Those who give of themselves do it because they are bound by the need to. Sometimes the scars from this run very deep. They tell themselves they will not do it again. They will remain aloof, a spectator in life. Yet they can not turn off that "care" button. And all the words they told themselves die when they see someone in need.. Of a smile, of their strength, their support, a shoulder to cry on, a hand to hold, a warm meal or a bed for a night. This need to nurture.. Should they turn their back on it, they may actually find the pain much worse than three nails and a cross..

Sorry, I chattered on here.. Just found a lot of meaning in this write. :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

the poet has been accused of having a 'messianic complex' by his close friend in the real world...thx Rogue your words make sense to his palmistry...its very true what u write...to the T

[Deron Alexis]

cool protecting someone and baring the pain for it really a sign of love and devotion good comparison really deep poetic

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes thank you for the analysis it is a tribute to all those who have sacrificed for oithers

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Beautiful !!!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

welcome :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

That was differant but a very well written peice and a joy to read.. Great job :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Alicia I am honored by your presence and kind words:) thanku

[Jasmine]

I like this poem very much... The great thing about it is that you can apply it to many, many subjects. Love, family, destruction, despair, I could go on forever. It's universal. Wonderful writing.

[Daytonight]

I love the nurturing and protecting aspects of this poem. Well done.

[Desert Dreamer]

You are strong, and take care of the ones in your care even when they give you pain...you have a kind soul.

[SM Davis]

Hmm...written from a pyromaniacal POV?

[Becky C Strukamp]

Wonderfully enchanting and vibrant. Very nice.

[Raven Starhawk]

The title caught my eye but the poem as a whole is nugget of amazing writing. I harvest your words and take into consideration their immense beauty and nature.