You will never know

Id like to tell you what you mean to me....but I cant.....so ...I guess will write you....

You will never know

Your smile dispels the darkness and the clouds too will agree,
What is the plain starlight, comparatively?
Your friendship is valued by someone immensely,
You will never know you are adored, so truly...

What words cannot express, the eyes do easily,
and actions are replaced by just smiling tenderly,
What treasure would you lose by greeting me warmly?
Why Yellow rose you choose when Red bloom merrily...

Never mind the world, It runs at its own pace,
never mine Time, it runs its own race
But do mind one thing and that Girl, is your face,
The Earth had never seen one so filled with grace....

Never mind mistakes, they are part of daily life,
Never mind proposals, you are bound to be someones` wife,
But do care for people whose lives have gone astray,
They are relying on you to guide and show the way...

And when the ripe years come,recall your brighter days,
Do not even contemplate, that there might have been better ways,
For what Destiny had in store, It gave its all to you
And Friendship evermore, from true friends who loved you!

Author's Note

Make it your poem too.....to the one who you loved...but never loved you...

Reviews

[November Gold]

This was my favorite paragraph;

Never mind mistakes, they are part of daily life,
Never mind proposals, you are bound to be someones` wife,
But do care for people whose lives have gone astray,
They are relying on you to guide and show the way...

I loved this

[Becky C Strukamp]

I agree with Novemeber Gold on the paragraph selection as a fav part of your poem. Speaks volume!!

[Cecelia]

And when the ripe years come,recall your brighter days,
Do not even contemplate, that there might have been better ways,
For what Destiny had in store, It gave its all to you
And Friendship evermore, from true friends who loved you

These lines carry soooo much wisdom....too many times the "ripe years" disintegrate into regret and unfruitful recall when they can be filled with friendship, love and accomplishment build on learning from the past... It is loving someone else that makes our hearts grow, having it returned... priceless..

Great points made and taken in this thoughtful poem...

[-Ink Artist-]

wonderful rhythm and rhyme to this piece. the ever-so sad tale of unrequited love written in tenderness with the grace of a poet. lovely work. :)

~lori