i hurt

i hurt

A Poem by rosaliecullen624

this was inspired by the upcoming twilight mvie new moon. this is how bella feels when edward leaves her.


when you left

i died

my heart stopped beating

my soul stopped soaring the feelings you made me feel

are nothing but memories


every night i wake up screaming

the nightmares keep on coming

you kept me safe

in your arms

your prescence lingers

how it hurts


to say your name

 i hurt

to think of you

i cry

to remember your lips on mine

i fall apart


im nothing but a shell

no laughter comes from me

no smile on my lips

all i feel is the pain

the tears fall on my cheek


you did this to me

you left me

i hate you, i hate you

but worst of all

i hate the fact that i still love you


everyday i wish for your return

even though you don't love me

you are the only one who can fix

my broken heart

you are the only one who can

make my soul fly

you are the only one who can

make me feel again


to say your name

i hurt

to think of you

i cry

to remember your arms around me

i fall apart


you took parts of me

you took them with you

i can feel the gaps

i want to be whole again


darkness is everywhere

i see no light

all i have are the memories

its all i have to stay sane

but in the end

i still feel the pain


to say your name

i hurt

to think of you

i cry

to remember your hand holding mine

i fall apart


without you next to me

im so lonely

even with people there

i remain in the darkness

searching for my light





© 2009 rosaliecullen624

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This is very heartfelt, creative, and passionate. This was very well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This was amazing. You showed her hurt and passion very well. How she completely fell apart without him. How she would hold on to herself just so she wouldnt fall apart. The best i've read of yours so far. Congrads and keep on writting.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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brooklyn, NY

im tall and i have green eyes and lomg red hair. i have 3 piercngs- eyebrow, nose and stomach and i have 7 tattoos- 4 on my ankles, 2 on mywrists and 1 on my stomach. i like vampires and witchcraft.. more..


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