She's like the peacock butterfly

 

She is as beautiful as the peacock butterfly.         

Her hair a vibrant red, eyes as blue as the

deepest of caribbean oceans.

Creative in mind, Elegant in body.

Her soul so kind and friendly.

She lifts spirits as she enters any room.

She is graceful and respectful.

Just like the butterfly she is delicate.

Her orrery lights up the darkness of any cloudy day.

She does not speak to much but

she listens carefully and with good intent.

Always giving and pleasing others.

She puts the world before herself.

She will learn to love herself, as much as others do.

For now just like the peacock butterfly.

she will hibernate when winter comes.

When summer time comes again.

She will spread her wings and fly into

the ever lasting sun.

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Rosemary, you said you weren't confident about your writing but after reading this I have to stress time and time again that you know how to touch chords in people. This is such a beautiful post, ' She will learn to love herself, as much as others do.' - you wrote that, the words are yours to remember. (You)

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
I really liked it!
Keep it up!

[zainul]

The poem is a masterpiece.
My most favorite line is:
"She is as beautiful as the peacock butterfly."

[WILDERNESS]

nice one

[Mary C]

Nicely penned.