"HEY YOU!

 

"yes you!

listen to my words.

For they wont be slaughtered like a lamb to the sword.

You dont listen. You can't see. Your blind to your own emotions.

Your sick selfesh ways. Cut me up but i keep going.

The insults you throw will become my laughing matter

Im going to roll them in breadcrumbs and fry them in batter.

I will enjoy my life. Without you in it. Your not my be all

and end all. Your just a sinner.

 "yes you! listen to this!

When karma comes back im going watch you trip

All the heartache and hurt you left inprinted in me.

Its been washed away.

 Ive been cleansed.

 No more pain. 

 I am free.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

My goodness, Rosemary, your wings have turned from white to bright red and off and away you go, saying your words as if life has grabbed you and taken you along with it! Sad, tho, sad the underlying impressions, implications, whatever .. too much passed .. too much hurt .. but .. done now, done.

[highthought]

u know the life of females who were dropped is a serious matter, u gave something here to help them up

[Lorna]

HEY YOU!
This poem is absolutely clever, it is wonderfully written, it is a beautiful mess of words thrown together into a pile of pain and anger, I love it!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Amazing! So heartfelt, so inspiring to us! I love this. i love your message and all your impressions... it's really good! This is astounding..
Great write dear! ^^ Thanks for sharing!

[WILDERNESS]

that is just superb. it hit me like a truck, moved a man inside me. you went for it and hit bulls eye........................well done

[Honey54]

very beautiful bright and inspirtational! love it!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very meaningful write ...and beautifully described..liked it ,thanks

[rosemary keogh]

This poem was fun to write. Its not about me. As i expressed it to my son. He rapped it. Funny out. Ha ha

[J. J. Nightingale]

EXCELLENT ! YOU GO GIRL !! ..

I LOVE IT !

JAZZY :)