For once

Its on grief out of guilt, on an action committed that is becoming unbearable and lethal.

For once just look at me, for the world seems beautiful no more.

For once just listen to me, for the ocean of thoughts must meet some shore.

Let me see you smile, its one of the many things I miss.

Let me make you laugh, for I am craving to be granted this bliss.

For once sit besides me, I want to feel am alive.

For once hold my hands, I will get to know whats mine.

Those days and moments with you were priceless,

every breathe without you makes every second peaceless.

For once talk to me, for I am tired of talking to myself.

Don't just leave me like an unwanted book on the shelf.

It seems that a broken heart finds no cure,

So here I am all the more filthy and impure.

At once, please discontinue this coventry, Or do me a favor.

Kill me with your own hands and free my soul from you forever.........

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

The best thing about your poetry is the strength of your flow of words.... I enjoy reading your work although some of it is quite opposite to what I write....but you write very well my friend.....

[Sophy Freebirds]

My dear poet as i have mentioned many times romance is not my thing.But yesheartbreak is.And every line every word every phrase here mirrors the pain you went through.The repitition of once more just emphasizes how much desperately lonely you are.How you want to hold to that last piece of sanity that keeps you alive.I really like this piece.I am in a gloomy mood today so it was just my cup of tea :) *keep writing*

~Sophy

[Rounak Jain]

You have got it right. Thanks for all your reviews and time for my works.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

"For once just look at me, for the world seems beautiful no more.

For once just listen to me, for the ocean of thoughts must meet some shore.

Let me see you smile, its one of the many things I miss.

Let me make you laugh, for I am craving to be granted this bliss."

first verse is perfect and beautiful!!!
the thoughts conveyed throughout the poem are touching but the rhyming is not (my personal opinion!)
i liked it!
:)

[Rounak Jain]

This was my first poem. My fav. Thanks for the honest comments. It means a lot.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome...........:) :)