::More Than A Feeling::

::More Than A Feeling::

A Poem by Jeanette

You turn my senses on high

Tickling and lingering on every nerve

Caressing the sweetness of every curve

 

It's more than a feeling

 

You sing to my heart

Loving and lazy you stretch my soul

Bitterly fragrant you fill me up whole

 

It's more than a feeling

 

You protect and guard me

My body as it is yours

Bound like gravity to me you serve

 

It's more than a feeling

 

You touch and invade

No patch of flesh undone

Leaving me breathless and totally spun

 

It's more than a feeling

 

It's a notion

It's a spirit

It's rapture and ecstacy

It's chemically

Breathlessy

Mentally dense

 

It's velvet and steady

It's subdued and daring

 

Endless

With no floors or ceilings

It's all of me

It's more than a feeling

 

 

© 2012 Jeanette


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Powerful and beautifully romantic.. love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


That's a thorough description of senses and feelings at their peak. "More than a feeling," is a great song and you've incorporated it nicely as a refrain to this deeply written poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well done! love all stanzas so I can't pull a particular one, but as a whole I enjoyed very much!

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is great, reminds me of the Boston song real nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is the title of my favorite BOSTON song.

Your work has a pleasant and breezy feel to it. It reminds me of the first feelings of love as they begin to tickle the spirit.

Not being a poet myself, I have not thoughts on any corrects.

All I can say is well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Sir. Rock on.
Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Ditto!
Keith

8 Years Ago

I was driving in town the first time I heard it and turned around and went to the local Payless and .. read more
Nice! Very Nice Awesome poem I loved it! Rock on!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jeanette

8 Years Ago

God babbling?... Well that's a first.
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

Good babbling sorry
Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Oh... haha, that makes more sense.

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