::More Than A Feeling::

You turn my senses on high

Tickling and lingering on every nerve

Caressing the sweetness of every curve

 

It's more than a feeling

 

You sing to my heart

Loving and lazy you stretch my soul

Bitterly fragrant you fill me up whole

 

It's more than a feeling

 

You protect and guard me

My body as it is yours

Bound like gravity to me you serve

 

It's more than a feeling

 

You touch and invade

No patch of flesh undone

Leaving me breathless and totally spun

 

It's more than a feeling

 

It's a notion

It's a spirit

It's rapture and ecstacy

It's chemically

Breathlessy

Mentally dense

 

It's velvet and steady

It's subdued and daring

 

Endless

With no floors or ceilings

It's all of me

It's more than a feeling

 

 

Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

Powerful and beautifully romantic.. love it.

[Relic]

That's a thorough description of senses and feelings at their peak. "More than a feeling," is a great song and you've incorporated it nicely as a refrain to this deeply written poem.

[Corset]

well done! love all stanzas so I can't pull a particular one, but as a whole I enjoyed very much!

[HopelessRomantic]

this is great, reminds me of the Boston song real nice

[Keith]

This is the title of my favorite BOSTON song.

Your work has a pleasant and breezy feel to it. It reminds me of the first feelings of love as they begin to tickle the spirit.

Not being a poet myself, I have not thoughts on any corrects.

All I can say is well done :)

[Jeanette]

It's awesome you mentioned Boston, cuz that is exactly what inspired me. That and Harley down there. We love our music! Glad you liked it, and thrilled to see others love the song as well! =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Sir. Rock on.

[Jeanette]

Ditto!

[Keith]

I was driving in town the first time I heard it and turned around and went to the local Payless and bought the LP. Wow I just dated myself. I now have a copy on CD, of course :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice! Very Nice Awesome poem I loved it! Rock on!

[Jeanette]

Really? It kinda feels like I was just babbling...lol.

[Harley (arbiter)]

But it's God babbling. I like it

[Jeanette]

God babbling?... Well that's a first.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Good babbling sorry

[Jeanette]

Oh... haha, that makes more sense.