::Fyre::

Fyre you are beautiful.
Fyre you are deadly.

 

You warm me

Burn me

Excite me.

 

As your flame leapt higher
I could feel your power
The infinite dimensions
The impeding desire.

 

Like water visually smooth
Climbing and ripping
Through the air you move.

 

The joy in your light
The spectrums of your color
The simple delight
In your endless valor.

 

I long to touch
And caress your curves
But you are a temptress
And will surely burn.

 

The longings run deeper
Than I had expected
You call me in
Just to be rejected.

 

You mean mean heat
You tease and you play
Dancing on nothing
As if to say,

 

"Come play with me you feeble human"

"Come play and meet your doom"

 

But I know better fyre
I know your loves not true
You only wish to consume me
What will happen if you do?

 

I will burn and stink of death
While you sit back and laugh with the rest.

I will not let you pull me in
I will not let you sink me in sin.

 

Although you are so tempting
I really must decline
I will enjoy you from afar
And will not cross that line.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Fire excites you.... That is basically all that I
learned in th9s poem. But I have been reading
for a long while and I am trying to learn more.
I would like to go over some of your poetry and
find out what you were thinking when you wrote
it. It is nice, but to me obtuse. I need you to
lead me thorugh.
----- John

[Whiskurz]

I liked this......Really well penned......Whisk