::Lost Expressions::

::Lost Expressions::

A Poem by Jeanette

I want to be empty.
I want to be free.
I need some compassion,
a reason to Be.

 

 

I have a heart,
I have a mind.
But nothing to share
with someone kind.

 

 

Emotions racing at the speed of light,

but no expression or way out in sight.

 

 

A reason to care
has eluded me,
for the people who judge
but will not see.

 

 

I feel like your honeybee,
worker, but never queen.
I feel like Im used, abused,
and never truly seen.

 

 

Will I ever be loved,

a pawn in your plot to survive.
Im tired of settling,

and just living to be alive.

© 2012 Jeanette


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This is beautifully crafted, you express your images really well and I can get a mental picture of what your trying to tell readers. Nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The only one who is loved in
this world is the lover.



Posted 11 Years Ago


As the poem when on, I could relate to it more and more, and I think that's one of the best qualities a poem can have is the ability to relate to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Everyone can relate probably. Great. Kept it little simple and I like that

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on a lovely poem. I think most people can identify. I like the structure of this, makes it more readable. And you aren't getting overly flowing with the words...simple but powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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