A Poem by Jeanette

My anger amplifies
As does yours
You think you're right
And you have for years



But what you don't see
Is everyone elses views
So closed and protected
Loosened are your screws



Your temper is your downfall
The contempt dripping with malice
Isn't there any compassion
Why must you be so callous?



The ones who should have all your attention
Simply get none at all
And the ones who deserve your love
You disregard and make so small



But small we arn't
Not tiny, petite, or little
Significant, a better description
Yet we are so brittle



The maltreatment we recieve
Is no more validated
Than kicking an innocent child
Why are you so aggrevated?



Because you don't get your way?
Because I don't agree with you?
Gee, how rough...



The 'man' you claim to be
Is pathetic and mean
The person you want to be
Sure likes making a scene



You make me want to use words
Ones I prefer not to say
They make me want to cringe
Like 'hate', 'leave', and 'go away'



I wish you were the person
I always thought you could be
But that will never happen
Because you are so mean

© 2012 Jeanette

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i loved this this was great i can definitely relate to this excellent!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

It's about US... =)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Hmmm. At first i thought it was about me, some parts of it can be relatiable towards me.
Its good ur getting this out......... (:

Posted 9 Years Ago

Aww... huh I think we all have someone like this or atleast have met someone like this. Anouther great write! Keep up de good work

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really nicely written & a strong message. I think this is relatable for all readers... we all have that one person who you just don't see eye-to-eye with, no matter what. I loved the honesty in your poem, the harshness, the fierceness. Amazing!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on June 20, 2012
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