::Sorry I Loved You::

::Sorry I Loved You::

A Poem by Jeanette

Roses are red,
Too much has been said.

 

 

Violets are blue,
We are now through.

 

 

I thought our vows
Were sacred and true,

 

 

But I know now
They were nothing to you.

 

 

You think I don't know,
And that you can hide,

 

 

But now I'm just sorry
I was ever your bride.

© 2012 Jeanette


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Though I am sure humour was not your aim in this poem,
I however find humour in the first stanza:
'Roses are red, too much has been said.'
This line challenges the cliche associated with Valentine's day.

But at the same time I see the serious concept
you depict in this poem.

WELL DONE

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Thank you!



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Though I am sure humour was not your aim in this poem,
I however find humour in the first stanza:
'Roses are red, too much has been said.'
This line challenges the cliche associated with Valentine's day.

But at the same time I see the serious concept
you depict in this poem.

WELL DONE

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
This is beautiful , sad actually

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Thanks.
I agree with other Ethan here Ouch! But I like the tone and also love the ending. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ouch! A tough subject but so very well written! Loved the ending!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Thanks Ethan! :)
Wow that was an amazing ending

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Why are you so easy to confuse Harwee? =)
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

I don't know. Heh "that's why I'm me and you're you and that's why I love you"
Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Lmao... awesome... Im LOVED!! wooohooooo!
(Respectful) *Laughter*
All jokes set aside, I love how you a new twist on an old saying. It is a good piece of writing, and I like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate it. =)
This was a beautifully written poem although sad.....Well penned my friend......Whisk

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked this one! Haha funny yet sadish. Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jeanette

8 Years Ago

I thought that was a funny story... now it feels all serious now... like heavy man...
Harley (arbiter)

8 Years Ago

...are you high? And if Yes why aren't you sharing XD
Jeanette

8 Years Ago

Wow....

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